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Sep 17, 2008 14:28

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tangled, mpreg, sam/dean, supernatural, slash

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evenindeath September 17 2008, 14:02:22 UTC
I'm really getting sucked into the story! Dean is so adorable *squishes him* and Sam with the dreams about Dean and the baby really adds an interesting touch.
I can't wait for the next part of the fic!

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claudia_lexan September 17 2008, 14:30:53 UTC
The next chapter is when Sam gets his memories back, but it's not that simple. I thought that Sam dreaming about Sam would be better, than him suddenly getting all of his memories back.

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evenindeath September 17 2008, 14:37:17 UTC
I makes the fic alot more interesting that way, I can't wait to see how you bring his memory back :)

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claudia_lexan September 17 2008, 15:45:18 UTC
thank you , I wanted Sam to get his memories back in a gradual process, so when his memories did return it wasn't just dropped into the story.

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idiot4dean September 17 2008, 17:37:26 UTC
I don't like John in this, he seems to not care about Dean. I'm not surprised Dean doesn't want to share with him what happened but how's he going to keep the secret much longer. Dean seems really frustrated, he can't do his normal work and he can't easily hide out until after the birth. Big hugs for Dean. I like how Sam is getting dream glimpses of what is happening, I wonder how quickly he'll try to contact Dean when he gets his memories back and his reaction to the pregnancy.

Looking forward to more.

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claudia_lexan September 18 2008, 07:11:50 UTC
Although John's behavior only gets so much worse in the next few chapters, he will eventually redeem himself. I just found myself unable to write John who accepted things easily. In the next chapter Sam does get all of his memories back. As for Dean's frustration, as being pregnant isn't a common occurrence I wanted tio try and put accross how hard it would be for him to have a baby

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gilesgirl September 17 2008, 18:56:50 UTC
Another really good chapter & I'm liking that Sam's having those dreams....but he needs to hurry up and REMEMBER before Dean gives birth to their son.

:(

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claudia_lexan September 18 2008, 07:13:35 UTC
He does remember in the next chapter, but there will be a catch

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gilesgirl September 18 2008, 07:53:25 UTC
You and your @*#&$&#** catches, Claudia!!! :P~~

You are EEEEEEEEVIIIIILLLLLL!!!!!!

*gets her catcher's mitt on*

Okay, throw it to me. ;D

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claudia_lexan September 18 2008, 14:42:26 UTC
It is so much better to be a evil than good. You get to have so much more fun. I'm evil with the catches, but I'#m so much worse with the cliffhangers.

walks away laughing or should that be cackling

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wicca_faith_fi September 17 2008, 19:52:06 UTC
yey an update. I liked this chapter and am still (impatiently) waiting for Sam to come into the story fully. But I really want Dean to give with to Bob first because babies are cute - so long as they aren't mine and I can give them back when they do something un-cute. SOrry for babbling, I really like this series, one of my faves.

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claudia_lexan September 18 2008, 07:23:39 UTC
Sam does starting coming more into the story in the next chpater, but it isn't going to be easy.

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magos186 September 18 2008, 02:06:29 UTC
could john be a bigger ass? seriously, the beginning of this chapter totally makes me wanna run him down or set him on fire or something. how dare he be such an ass to dean! Everything else was good though. Can't wait for more.

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claudia_lexan September 18 2008, 07:05:30 UTC
Oh, John just gets so much more worse in the next chapters. John gets a lot more devious, but he doesn't stay that way

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