I'm really getting sucked into the story! Dean is so adorable *squishes him* and Sam with the dreams about Dean and the baby really adds an interesting touch. I can't wait for the next part of the fic!
The next chapter is when Sam gets his memories back, but it's not that simple. I thought that Sam dreaming about Sam would be better, than him suddenly getting all of his memories back.
I don't like John in this, he seems to not care about Dean. I'm not surprised Dean doesn't want to share with him what happened but how's he going to keep the secret much longer. Dean seems really frustrated, he can't do his normal work and he can't easily hide out until after the birth. Big hugs for Dean. I like how Sam is getting dream glimpses of what is happening, I wonder how quickly he'll try to contact Dean when he gets his memories back and his reaction to the pregnancy.
Although John's behavior only gets so much worse in the next few chapters, he will eventually redeem himself. I just found myself unable to write John who accepted things easily. In the next chapter Sam does get all of his memories back. As for Dean's frustration, as being pregnant isn't a common occurrence I wanted tio try and put accross how hard it would be for him to have a baby
It is so much better to be a evil than good. You get to have so much more fun. I'm evil with the catches, but I'#m so much worse with the cliffhangers.
yey an update. I liked this chapter and am still (impatiently) waiting for Sam to come into the story fully. But I really want Dean to give with to Bob first because babies are cute - so long as they aren't mine and I can give them back when they do something un-cute. SOrry for babbling, I really like this series, one of my faves.
could john be a bigger ass? seriously, the beginning of this chapter totally makes me wanna run him down or set him on fire or something. how dare he be such an ass to dean! Everything else was good though. Can't wait for more.
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I can't wait for the next part of the fic!
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Looking forward to more.
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You are EEEEEEEEVIIIIILLLLLL!!!!!!
*gets her catcher's mitt on*
Okay, throw it to me. ;D
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walks away laughing or should that be cackling
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