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Oct 28, 2004 20:50

Title: Ranger from the North
Author: Claudia
Pairing: Frodo/Halbarad
Rating: PG13
Summary: In the autumn after Bilbo leaves, Frodo meets a Ranger of the Northlands in the Shire. AU.

A little people, but of great worth are the Shire-folk. Little do they know of our long labour for the safekeeping of their borders, and yet I grudge it not. ( Read more... )

ranger from the north, lotr fiction

Comments 28

shirebound October 29 2004, 01:00:52 UTC

Wow. It's been so long since Halbarad has been able to talk freely with someone he loves, he's forgotten how. A few moments of quiet conversation with Frodo about their... size differences... would have brought them both to a much happier resolution. But I suppose it wasn't a time for quiet conversation, poor dears!

This is an amazingly written phrase:

There was not enough of Frodo, not enough of his sweet pale skin to rub against, and not enough air in either of them to allow for him to stay locked on his lips in drunken bliss.

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:25:33 UTC

Awww...now you've made my heart ache for poor Halbarad...:-) And of course, wouldn't communication (proper) make it better? Poor wandering ranger, poor lonely hobbit! Thank you!!

alchemie October 29 2004, 02:08:12 UTC

Great stuff, Claudia. I printed out several chapters last night to get caught up. Frodo really is able to drawn them in, eh? Hence the name of my website - Moth to a Flame. ;-)

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:19:40 UTC

Thanks! Yes, Moth to a Flame -- appropriate indeed! Thanks for reading!

karadin October 29 2004, 02:39:27 UTC

Well done, thanks for posting, looking forward to more.

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:18:39 UTC

Thank you for continuing to read!

lorie945 October 29 2004, 02:48:12 UTC

Oh, the hotness. Poor boys, such a frustrating end to their night of lust love. Ah, but Halbarad is so very chivalrous. *pats the Dunadain*

Really a nice technical job, Claudia, working the flashbacks between the present action. (And keeping Halbarad from walking into a tree while thinking of Frood.)

mariole October 29 2004, 04:03:38 UTC

Dittos this. Keep it coming, Claudia! Or them! Whatever!

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:14:30 UTC

hee hee, thank you, Mariole! ;-)

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:20:39 UTC

*nods* Yes, we do so melt for chivalrous Rangers...:-) (and I think he's already patted himself - d'oh, did I say that aloud? :-D)

Thank you!

baranduin October 29 2004, 02:49:55 UTC

that cracking open of stone

Great line!

claudia603 October 29 2004, 21:17:56 UTC

Thanks!! <3