I"m Hungry by Celena

[clauderainsrm]

Hello. My name is Celena

Comments

[alycewilson]

Aw, poor aliens! Very creative, especially the ending. There was humor in this, too, and I love humor.

[favoritebean]

This reminds me of my visit to Busch Gardens. It rained that day too, but there were no sugary aliens. Instead, every guest seemed to eat pizza and french fries. It seemed like a very unhealthy meal.

I hope the trip wasn't too traumatic.

[octavia_blue]

I really loved the details you included in your story like the amount of cotton candy, the roller coaster ride and the four puddles at the end.

[myrna_bird]

What curious neighbors, indeed! I love stories with surprise endings so I enjoyed this one a lot!

[piggington]

HI HELLO THIS IS LITTLE PIG IF I LIVED NEXT DOOR TO PEOPLE WHO WERE ACTUALLY FOOD I'D EAT THEM ALL THE TIME EVEN THOUGH THAT'S NOT VERY NEIGHBORLY THANK YOU I LOVE YOU