FanFic: Angry Sex is Best

Nov 06, 2011 22:50


Title: Angry Sex is Best
Author: ClassicFREAK
Rating: NC-17/M
Warning: Smutty McSmut Smut.
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon = God, Annie = Loser.
Author's Notes: I swear to God I'm just cranking stories out. I've broken a dam of ideas and I don't know how to stop them. Ficcy!Friday prompt from brin_bailey; Jeff likes to get Annie mad at him because it turns him on.
First ( Read more... )

community, attempt at writing., jeff/annie, livejournal, milady/milord

Leave a comment

Comments 7

shopgirl909 November 7 2011, 06:00:21 UTC
Hot damn!!!

This was so good.

Two little typos: "he out her down" I think you mean "put her down"

and "a pause between thups" I think you mean "pause between thumps."

Anywho, keeps the stories coming (don't pardon that pun) and continue with the smut, because, if you ask me, we need more of that on here.

Great job.

Reply

classicfreak November 7 2011, 06:16:38 UTC
Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistakes. I write my stories in the memo function on my phone and it doesn't have a spellcheck. It's also a pain in the ass to fix mistakes so I try to catch them before I post to the public but sometimes I mis them so. Thanks, again.

I agree, there isn't enough smut in this community and I'll def. try my hand at it again.
Thanks for reading!

Reply

thebadunkadunk November 7 2011, 11:27:02 UTC
The last line too, He new had a new favorite face. I think you mean knew

Reply

classicfreak November 7 2011, 11:33:19 UTC
Thanks for pointing that out!

Reply


xmaspterodactyl November 8 2011, 02:01:24 UTC
Words do not describe how envious of Jeff that I am right now. No words at all.

Damn....just damn...

Reply

classicfreak November 8 2011, 02:22:04 UTC
so ... not terrible?

Reply

xmaspterodactyl November 8 2011, 02:29:23 UTC
Pretty bloody far from terrible. Let's say you conveyed your point rather well. And with time, it's gonna get really good. A great start. Keep it up.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up