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FanFic: The Green Eyed Monster is a Bitch.

Nov 01, 2011 22:41

Title: The Green Eyed Monster is a Bitch.
Author: ClassicFREAK
Rating: PG - 13 (Lots of swearing.)
Word Count: 4,689
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon is a God and I bow at his feet.
Summary: Britta's pregnant. Annie is a godsent. Britta's an idoit. Future!Fic
Authors Note: Ficcy Friday Prompt from imbettygrable Britta's Pregant. I asked her what she wanted and found that my ( Read more... )

community, attempt at writing., jeff/annie, livejournal, milady/milord

Comments 12

leigh198910 November 6 2011, 20:58:02 UTC

Britta's such a mess, I felt bad for her. Love the plot twist! I was hoping for that the entire time. Good work.

classicfreak November 6 2011, 21:59:17 UTC

Okay thank you so much for replying because I've kind of been freaking out about this story. Most if it was written in half delirium while on the bus to work at ingodly hours.
Thank gosh you like this. Thanks for reading.

queenspencer November 7 2011, 01:20:37 UTC

Oh, Britta. You silly lady. I really, really enjoyed this! I love the Britta/Annie friendship throughout. And the twist at the end! I never saw that coming. It was nice to see Annie being so supportive. I like that she didn't even think twice and offered Britta her help. I'm still hoping we get some good moments between the two of them on the show this season. Great job!

classicfreak November 7 2011, 01:43:35 UTC

I toads love Annie / Britta friendship. It should be canon because they really need to work together instead of fighting as much as they do. Lets hope Harmon feels the same way.
When I was writing the story I kept thinking about how terrible Britta would have felt about Jeff being happy with someone else, and I lived the Britta / Troy storyline in Remedial Chaos Theory and this happened. I was kind of playing with the idea of writing a sequel and I wanted an out if it ever happened.
I'm so glad you love my baby. You should thank imbettygrable for the amazing idea.
Thanks for reading!

krystal214 November 7 2011, 16:28:37 UTC

Plot twist. Genius. That was really funny. I felt bad for Britta, but loved the other characterizations going on. Great job.

classicfreak November 7 2011, 17:16:07 UTC

I wanted people to feel bae for Britta because I find she gets crapped on a lot in the show and she deserves to be cared for.
Thanks! I am a big Britta / Troy shipper and they needed to happen in this story.
I'm glad you liked it. :)

moony88 November 7 2011, 23:22:03 UTC

No one but Abed noticed Troy slowly backing out of the room before gunning it down the hallway.

“Plot Twist.”

Fantastic! Haha

classicfreak November 7 2011, 23:44:38 UTC

Thank you, aparently a lot of people liked that plot twist
Which makes me a very happy girl :)
Thank you Thank you Thank you!

imbettygrable December 5 2011, 05:08:13 UTC

Alrighty...so I know I'm a bad, bad person for only getting to this NOW...I'm sorry. RL, what are you gonna do? xD

Oh :( And I'm sorry if I offended you by going all word-vomitty about my ideas. I honestly didn't mean for you to feel pressured or anything.

I loved this story. I loved what you did with Britta - you made her so sympathetic and I wanted to give her a big schmoopy hug. I also love Abed's little "plot twists!" You got a real knack for characterization.

I loved the Annie/Britta friendship and how Annie was THERE for her...I wish the show could do more with them like this. Maybe without a baby xD

And the final plot twist, of course, made me half laugh and half smile - TROY, you dirty puppy!

Eh, so what if our brains work a little different? This was absolutely wonderful. You're a good writer!! :D

classicfreak December 5 2011, 17:01:18 UTC

You are not a bad person at all, RL gets in the way of everything, I know that! The fact that you're doing it now makes you awesome ( ... )

imbettygrable December 5 2011, 18:03:31 UTC

Alright, yay! Yeah, LJ has been acting strange. I was freaking out earlier because I've been writing this story for a ficcy friday prompt in an entry (I've tried writing my stories for here on Word, but it just screws everything up) and I thought it disappeared! Thank god it didn't though...I may not be too far into it, but I spent hours on it because of my stupid writer's block ( ... )

classicfreak December 5 2011, 19:39:01 UTC

I have to write comments 2 or 5 times and it really bugs me that sometimes I just won't comment because I forget what I was going to write and I feel like such an asshole because there are SO many good stories on here (and I went all the way back through the archive, and tried to read them all, so many talented writers here!) I was writing them on my phone in the memo part but it took like half an hour to get it from my phone to the computer and then I had to look through for corrections and it was a pain but I found a word docment app on my phone and I've been using that so ... yeah. it made it a bit easier ( ... )