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FanFic: Getting out.

Oct 25, 2011 22:29

Title: Getting Out
Author: ClassicFREAK
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Remedial Chaos Theory, or you have no idea what's going on.
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon rules my worl with an iron fist.
Summary: Annie has had enough of acting like a little girl to get what she wants. She is Woman, hear her rationalize.

( She's been getting bits and pieces of the story through the questions she's been able to ask the study group. What happened to your arm, are you drunk and where’s Pierce were all answered with silence. After her little talk with the group, which ended with her hyperventilating with grief when the flash backs started attacking her brain like a zombie. )

attempt at writing., jeff/annie, milady/milord

Comments 2

xmaspterodactyl October 28 2011, 08:06:52 UTC

I enjoyed the fact that you had Annie working through her mental state without the anguish. Don't get me wrong, I imagine plenty of that happened as well, but you addressed the problem and worked through a solution that makes her come out of the ward a stronger person. I don't know of that made sense, but I did enjoy the story.

classicfreak October 28 2011, 13:56:31 UTC

Thanks, I feel like Annie's always been thought of as a little mentally unstable, ever since her run in with the window (oh god, I meant that to be punny)and I just wanted to prove that sometimes it just takes a while to work through a problem.
Thanks for reading, that made me happy.
(And it did makes sense, though I thought my writing got a bit clincal at some parts.)