FanFic: Let's Keep It Together

[classicfreak]

Title: Let's Keep It Together (5/?) Operation: Show and Tell
Author: ClassicFREAK
Rating: NC-17/NSFW
Warning: Deliciously smutty.
Word count: 5, 434 words.
Summary: Annie can't stop thinking about her and Jeff doing the horizontal (or against-the-wall) tango, so maybe she devises a plan (this is Annie we're talking about.
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon makes me

Comments

[classicfreak]

YAY! Ugh, busy you are too awesome, seriously.
I like, LOVE YOU!

[shionthekid]

Awesome :) I just got caught up today with this story and now it's finally got sex :D Hot sex :D :D So, double yay!

[classicfreak]

I know, I was surprised how long I held off on the sex, it was really hard to write though. I almost didn't want to publish it because I wasn't sure.

Thanks!

[crittab]

Awesome. *So* awesome. So hot. Ridiculous.

You might want to have a look through this for edits though. There are a places where you switch tenses and go from third person to first person perspective. Otherwise, it's great :)

[classicfreak]

I wanted it to switch tenses like that, ake it seem little ... I don't know confusing maybe? I probably should have read over it to make sure that it was broken up a bit better :S

And thanks!

[crittab]

You can switch POV's easier if you announce it by putting "Jeff's POV" in italics before his section and "General POV" when you're switching back so it's not so abrupt.

[veronica_grace2]

OK I sooo needed to read a story like this today, and yours was great!
I'm beyond words... but I think my pic says it all for me.

[classicfreak]

Yay, I'm so glad. I would try to read through my smut but I just don't find it sexy :/
I am soo weird!
and I love your user pic, it's perfection!