Title: chemicals collide
Authors:
fiorie and
miss_bennieFandom: Jonas Brothers RPF
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 8,864 in this part, 18,300 total
Warnings: Incest, underage. Oh God.
Summary: It's the three of them, now and until they're done, because you can break up a band but you can't break up your family.
Authors' Notes: No disrespect intended
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you are seriously my new favorite Joick writer, like it was so well written.... it was like perfect
also i think, and this is just me, that you MUST MUST continue it!
you really should
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The characterization in this is so good, eternally positive Kevin and constantly pensive Nick and Joe--on paper it sounds like maybe Joe is bipolar or ADD, but in reality it's just the way he feels things. Aaaahh. The voices are perfect and the FEEL of the whole thing is perfect, just, the brotherly relationships and how they're these dorky kids who are weirdly grown-up and professional at the same time, how seriously they take their music and their responsibilities even though it's all too much sometimes, how Nick's health is constantly on everyone's mind, how TIRED they are all the time, how claustrophobic the buses are, how claustrophobic the fame is. Seriously, the whole thing, it's just so epic, i can't even deal, there are about a thousand things I want to quote back at you, seriously, too many for me to even know where to start. CHOPSTICKS ( ... )
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And also THANK YOU THANK YOU OMG THANK YOU. All of that is exactly what we wanted to get across in the characterization and the flow of it all and just, dorky boys how are they THE BEST I CAN'T EVEN. Ahem. Also, hahaha, um, so things were originally going to be very vanilla and tame, but then things transpired, and it's what the CHARACTERS wanted. Neither of us can be held responsible for any filthy things that occurred over the course of the narrative. Lalalalalalala.
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Heeeeeee, CLEARLY it's what the characters wanted! IT IS IMPORTANT TO RESPECT THEIR NEEDS. Their filthy, incestuous needs. N-not that I read those parts again today. M-more than once.
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