Part 2: chemicals collide (joe/nick) NC-17

Nov 16, 2008 18:26

Title: chemicals collide
Authors: fiorie and miss_bennie
Fandom: Jonas Brothers RPF
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 8,864 in this part, 18,300 total
Warnings: Incest, underage. Oh God.
Summary: It's the three of them, now and until they're done, because you can break up a band but you can't break up your family.
Authors' Notes: No disrespect intended ( Read more... )

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fiorie November 17 2008, 01:26:34 UTC
Hahaha, thank you! We were kind of laughing and awwing and crying too, as we were writing this. I'm so glad you liked it! <3

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iheartvmars07 November 17 2008, 01:35:43 UTC
yeah i fucking love you, JSYK
you are seriously my new favorite Joick writer, like it was so well written.... it was like perfect

also i think, and this is just me, that you MUST MUST continue it!

you really should

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iheartvmars07 November 17 2008, 01:36:14 UTC
*you guys

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fiorie November 17 2008, 17:18:56 UTC
Thank you so much for the compliments, it means A LOT that you liked this! We loved writing it, so it's very possible we'll write more Joe/Nick. <3

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musicl0ver08 November 17 2008, 01:51:53 UTC
Oh my gosh that was so unbelievably cute!! <3

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miss_bennie November 17 2008, 18:20:34 UTC
Thank you so so much, we had a blast writing it! :D

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twisterfate November 17 2008, 02:05:33 UTC
I absolutely loved this!

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miss_bennie November 17 2008, 18:21:25 UTC
Aww, thank you thank you! :)

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I still don't have a JoBros icon, what the hell is wrong with me. agate November 17 2008, 02:28:55 UTC
Um. Hahahahaha. Okay. Well, it was completely obvious you two were UP TO SOMETHING the past few days, and, well. I LIKE THE RESULTS?!?!? Hahaha. Holy shit.

The characterization in this is so good, eternally positive Kevin and constantly pensive Nick and Joe--on paper it sounds like maybe Joe is bipolar or ADD, but in reality it's just the way he feels things. Aaaahh. The voices are perfect and the FEEL of the whole thing is perfect, just, the brotherly relationships and how they're these dorky kids who are weirdly grown-up and professional at the same time, how seriously they take their music and their responsibilities even though it's all too much sometimes, how Nick's health is constantly on everyone's mind, how TIRED they are all the time, how claustrophobic the buses are, how claustrophobic the fame is. Seriously, the whole thing, it's just so epic, i can't even deal, there are about a thousand things I want to quote back at you, seriously, too many for me to even know where to start. CHOPSTICKS ( ... )

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Re: I still don't have a JoBros icon, what the hell is wrong with me. miss_bennie November 17 2008, 18:47:27 UTC
Haha, I still don't get how we seemed like we were up to something. Also YEAH, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DIDN'T YET HAVE AN ICON AT THE TIME OF THIS COMMENT, YOU DISINGENUOUS LADY.

And also THANK YOU THANK YOU OMG THANK YOU. All of that is exactly what we wanted to get across in the characterization and the flow of it all and just, dorky boys how are they THE BEST I CAN'T EVEN. Ahem. Also, hahaha, um, so things were originally going to be very vanilla and tame, but then things transpired, and it's what the CHARACTERS wanted. Neither of us can be held responsible for any filthy things that occurred over the course of the narrative. Lalalalalalala.

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Re: I still don't have a JoBros icon, what the hell is wrong with me. agate November 17 2008, 19:00:05 UTC
Hahaha, you guys were so obvious, with your twitters, and telltale silences during Awesome Chat, and all kinds of things. AGs are like Easy Company, we can tell your mood just from the sound of your footsteps in the dark. <3 <3 <3 And OKAY, SO I HAVE AN ICON NOW, AND MAYBE I MADE IT MYSELF. I'm still feeling a little self-conscious and fragile over the whole thing, be nice to me. ;P

Heeeeeee, CLEARLY it's what the characters wanted! IT IS IMPORTANT TO RESPECT THEIR NEEDS. Their filthy, incestuous needs. N-not that I read those parts again today. M-more than once.

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