two weeks later

Feb 25, 2008 17:39

Something I did a few days ago. Probably won't make much sense to those outside the RP circle, but whatever! Criticism on form only is still welcome.

Metyra/Deacon in nature, but there's nothing explicit in the text.

Deacon is mine, and Metyra belongs to the wonderful Miss Kat.

Red.

It was the only colour he had left.  It had somehow infiltrated the ( Read more... )

writing: roleplay

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uglyyomithing February 27 2008, 00:17:03 UTC
Gdfhdjg. I don't know much about Deacon and Metyra other than the few tidbits Kat has mentioned to me here and there, but regardless, I adore this. <333 Your writing is so awesome wtf. <3 LOEV.

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clarkington February 27 2008, 20:09:36 UTC
omg you are the best ;; thank you so much! <3 maybe I should write more Metyra/Deacon XD;

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uglyyomithing February 27 2008, 20:13:26 UTC
NO YOU'RE THE BEST. >:\\\ Serious, though, it'd be awesome to see more writing from you, dude, Metyra/Deacon or not. YOUR DRABBLES ARE LIKE CRACK. :[ <3

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thepirateauryn February 28 2008, 04:40:08 UTC
Duh. Yes.

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thepirateauryn February 28 2008, 04:42:13 UTC
OKAY SO, I feel like a jerk not commenting on this! though, I guess I kinda did in person? WHATEVER, I am much less orally eloquent in person. OR AM I? Hu hu hu, plz ignore.

SO, you know I love this, and not just because of my FLAMING bias for this pairing right now. I have to say I prefer the sort of second half to the first half. BUT it is all good, and poor, poor Deacon. He really ought to knock on that door.
>8D

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clarkington February 28 2008, 18:26:49 UTC
yeah, I guess the second half is less abstraction and metaphor, huh XD BUT I am glad you like it! <3 for you, of course!

I am so in love with this pairing right now *_*

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