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Dec 04, 2004 13:43

Jae is doing these cool sentence long fic things in her LJ and I decided to try my hand at one. A sentence is usually how far I get in my writing, so it made sense ( Read more... )

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jae_w December 4 2004, 16:04:11 UTC
Hey, nice -- I liked the end, with the wheel, and how well that image works with the title.

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clarinetkate December 5 2004, 08:28:42 UTC
thank you! I initially had something about being a cog at the end of it but then I was like, wow this sentence is way long and lame. And I realized if I put cog in the title I said more with less. hahah

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