My first failed smut....

Apr 22, 2011 17:42


Title: Disobedience
Author: clariguard
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: 2min
Warning: FAILNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!! A little bondage......also cussing....

a/n: Soooooooo......  Because my umma, undeniablysarah and pandaeyes501 wanted me to write a smut (according to one of my polls...) I wrote one.... But it's my first smut... And I am NOT a smut writer..... It's about 730 words so it's also really short.... And I'm not a cusser so it's kinda weird for me to write with it and stuff....and soooo yeaaa.....
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“Suck.”
“No.”

“Why the hell not.”

“Cause I don't suck dick.”

“Why the hell do you think I hired you, dumbass.?”

“Cause you thought the most expensive hoe would be the best. It's actually cause I'm the cutest. You're the dumbass.”

“Suck my dick.” Minho said, shoving his cock into Taemin's mouth. The disobedient one gagged when the tip touched the back of his throat. He pushed the older one off of him and coughed his lungs out.

“The hell's wrong with you? Ain't ever seen one this big ya hoe? Come on, it's not THAT big.”

'Yeah it is....' Taemin thought to himself.

“Come on, suck it already or you won't get paid.”

“You're too forceful.” Taemin spat at the older.

“Most would be drooling over this big ass dick and would be all over it by now. I'm just impatient, dumbass.”

“Yah! Quit calling me that you dumbfuck!”

“Least I know HOW to fuck. Bet you're still a virgin since you won't even get near me.”

“You suck.”

“No, that's your job.” Minho said walking over to Taemin.

“What the fuck! It's just figure of speech yo-” Taemin said before Minho's cock was slammed back into his mouth. This time Minho held Taemin's hair and pumped his head violently. He wasn't getting any pleasure from it though.

“You really need more training.” Minho told him, releasing his head and pulling out of his mouth.

“Like I said, I don't suck dick.” Taemin said looking over in a corner.

“Maybe I should just suck yours then.” Minho said, not giving Taemin time to react before pouncing on him.

“NO!! GET OFFA ME, MINHO!!” Taemin said trying to squirm away from Minho.

Minho smirked and dragged Taemin over to a bed and chained his wrists and ankles up in an X. Taemin's eyes were wide with fear now, looking into Minho's lustful ones.

“Let me go....Please...” Taemin said trying to sink into the bed.

“Nope. You'll be begging for more at the end, Taemin.” Minho said kissing his lips softly. He trailed down to Taemin's neck and started biting and sucking at the skin. It turned red and he continued down to Taemin's nipples. Minho licked and bit the nipples then blew cold air on them, watching them rise.

“M-Minho.....P-Please s-stop....” Taemin said, his back arched softly.

“I'm just beginning, Taemin...” Minho said grabbing Taemin's dick.

“Ah~~ M-Minho....” Taemin said, arching his back more from the simple touch. Minho started rubbing up and down the younger's shaft, watching Taemin's blissful face.

“Have you really not been touched before?” Minho asked, stopping with a smirk to hear his answer.

“N-No...” Taemin admitted. “Most would give up on me for being so disobedient....”

“Hmmm.... Not for me.” Minho said pumping Taemin's cock again. His tongue reached out and licked from the bottom up. Soft muffled moans could be heard from Taemin, as he grabbed the chains he was entangled with and started to pull on them, trying to break free.

“You can't get away, Taemin.” Minho said before taking Taemin's cock whole in his. Taemin screamed out in pleasure and arched his back high. His eyes bogged out of his head for a second before closing again.

It only took a little for Taemin to reach his limit but just before he could have came in Minho's mouth, Minho retreated and spit in his hand. He coated his own dick and without even preparing the younger, he shot himself into Taemin.

Taemin screamed in more pain than pleasure as Minho thrust himself violently into Taemin.

“Damn it, Taemin. You're too fucking tight. The hell...” Minho said pushing even harder into Taemin, reaching his prostate. Taemin moaned loudly, telling Minho that he found the spot.

“Got it.” Minho said, not once hitting anywhere else but his spot. Minho grabbed Taemin's member and pumped with his thrusts. They were both about to reach their limit and came together with Minho adding a few more light thrusts.

Minho undid the chains as Taemin laid there, breathing heavily.

“You really should learn how to suck on cock better for next time.” Minho told him before putting his clothes on and leaving the hoe house.

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A/n: ...... don't kill me, it's just a major fail, that's all.... like i said, it was my first time writing a smut.... idk if i'll write more in the future, but i might and blahhhh.... please comment, i really hate silent readers..... <3<3<3<3<3

a/n: fanfic guide:  http://clariguard.livejournal.com/12292.html

oneshot, *fanfic

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