These Are the Moments (No. 4)

Jul 04, 2011 02:03

Title: These Are the Moments
Author: clanket
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Cute little moments in the fictional lives of Callie and Arizona. Pure fluff and will be a series of stand-alone stories. Popping (but not locking.)

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calzona, callie, calliope, art: fanfiction, grey's anatomy, callie/arizona

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roughian July 4 2011, 06:11:44 UTC
hi! You did a great job capturing yet another moment. I like that not only is there a thematic moment, but you also capture these two really organically and I really like the picture you paint of their lives together. As a reader, I feel like I get a glimpse right through their window or something! (not to be creeepy).

Arizona was absolutely adorable in this. I'm happy that she's no longer freaked out at the prospect of babies, but actually turning into someone who's kind of obsessed with the baby bumps. Those are great, and Callie did look cute with a baby bump (real or not). The fact that she notices Callie after such a long shift just goes along with the comfort of home. Callie's part of that.

Nice...

Their banter at the end is adorable, and I enjoy that Arizona is fascinated by Callie's pregnancy boobs. I giggled at this:

Callie decided to put an end to the fun before Arizona’s face became permanently stuck in the goofy look it was contorted into: lopsided grin upon her lips; eyes almost crossed as she leered at those ( ... )

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walking_weapon July 4 2011, 06:22:07 UTC
That was pure fluff and cuteness of the best kind :D

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funkyshaz57 July 4 2011, 07:10:52 UTC
Very nice and sweet and fluffy!!!!

“Nothing. Just - your boobs look awesome,” she admitted. - This cracked me up and then Arizona having a good play around afterwards..well honestly I couldn't keep the smile of my face!!!!!!

So....I was trying to think of a more subtle way to ask but I can't lol so instead....please please update Flip'er!!!!

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orangeroughy July 4 2011, 09:28:54 UTC
Really sweet and fluffy - the best kind of fic. I loved it! Thanks for posting!

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menta7 July 4 2011, 10:53:55 UTC
Olla!

Their dynamic is so well put. Great job! And omg, you described me with boobs. Like, really. boobs. YAY! I miss boobs. (it's been a rough month, exams and all. sigh).

Anyway, great job.

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