Afternoon Respite (1/1)

[clanket]

Title: Afternoon Respite
Author: clanket
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Callie and Arizona have a fun little afternoon. First go at smut but mixed with a little ‘romance’; hope it’s ok. *crosses fingers*

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Comments

[roughian]

Ummm... I can't make words, because my mind is just... GONE in the gutter. Clanket! What a great first effort! This is so originally hot and sexy. I love it.

I like that it's really sweet on top of being extremely hot. Like Arizona just worships the ground Callie walks on and loves everything about her body. I like that as a reader we get all the fine little details about ms. hottie herself. Sometimes it's tough to pull off the (almost typed pull out :-$) the first person thing, especially with the sexy, but I think this works really well.

Also? The image of Arizona fucking Callie like that on a dresser, I believe it was? Fucking priceless, dude. You've struck it rich with this one, for sure.

Anyway, seriously, I can't find more words. But... mm... good lord.

Particularly liked how scant the dialogue was, but what we got was grate. The part where Callie's just begging her for release? What was that thing again? UNF? ^5 v5

YOU need to write more smut.

Nice going, wife of mine.

(;3=

[clanket]

LOL! Thanks, walrus!
I appreciate the push to actually post it because I was freaking out about it a little at first. I'm glad I did though because it really isn't as scary as I thought it would be having everyone reading it :)

And the sexy is always great in first person - it kinda makes the reader feel like they're the ones doing it and, let's face it, who doesn't wanna be doing that to Callie? Mmm!

I feel like you don't always have to talk to get the scene/idea across and the truth is that you (AKA people in general) don't necessarily sit there and narrate the entire sexual encounter all the time LOL. And especially with having it done in first person, you get the idea straight from one of the characters so you know what they're thinking withouth having them say it out loud all the time.

Thanks for the super comment, LJ wife!

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('o') <-- more koala than bunny, but you get the gist
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[roughian]

OH, and this, too: my Calliope doesn’t giggle. At least my normal Calliope doesn’t and that’s why I love it when she’s relaxed like this.

I feel ya, Calliope girrrl.

[mc_maverick]

And to think I was going to bed.....don't think I'll be able to now.

Nice job.

[clanket]

LOL! Hope I didn't keep you up too late! ;)

[walking_weapon]

whoa...cold shower time...

[clanket]

Hope it helped ;)

[walking_weapon]

ya not so much :P

[iamgeels]

WOW. You should definitely write more smut.

[clanket]

Ha! Thanks, I think I will!