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Dec 14, 2007 17:40

Title: Blank Page
Author: clair_de_lune
Character: Michael
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary/prompt: Fox River and snow.
Notes: Written for the December Challenge at foxriver-fic. Thanks to happywriter06 for the beta.
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fanfic, fanfic: english, comm: foxriver-fic, fic: one shot, comm: french_fanfics, fandom: prison break

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clair_de_lune December 15 2007, 17:24:31 UTC
Merci beaucoup, je suis ravie que ça t'ait plu :o)

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thelana December 14 2007, 22:38:51 UTC
Wow, you have a real hand for drabbles. Which are all about the smart and the preferably very good end line. Like you did!

Great job!

Plus, it's great when I sort of have the English and the French version on top of each other :D For direct comparison :D

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clair_de_lune December 15 2007, 17:22:41 UTC
Thank you :-) I wrote a few drabbles based on foxriver-fic's prompts and I had a self-imposed limit of 500 words - um, except for a short Michael/Lincoln story: I got carried away a bit *g* I still have to post three of them.

Glad you find it handy ;-) I translated rather quickly, though: the French versions could have used a bit more editing ^__^

Sorry for the editing, and the editing. Apparently, I can't write!

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clair_de_lune December 15 2007, 17:29:09 UTC
Je te remercie :-)

On y trouve une atmosphère particulière, à la fois calme et mélancolique.
J'avais en tête ce plan de la saison 1 où l'on voit la prison sous la neige - je ne sais plus exactement à quel moment, peut-être après la non-exécution de Lincoln. Le drabble est parti de là.

Pour faire un lien vers ta fic, il te suffit de récupérer son adresse (http://chicago21.livejournal.com/1088.html en l'occurrence - je suis allée fouiller ;-)) et de créer un lien comme tu le fais habituellement. Ou alors je n'ai pas compris ce que tu demandais :-p

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clair_de_lune December 15 2007, 17:49:51 UTC
Nom du lien
En remplaçant évidemment URL par l'adresse effective et en conservant les guillemets.

Je le poste dans la rubrique "comments"?
C'est ce qu'ont fait les autres personnes... ;-) Pour autant que je sache, les modos font ensuite un récap' en fin de mois.

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chanchito_z December 18 2007, 04:16:12 UTC
I really realy enjoyed that. Powerful ending especially since we know what is coming - the understated action by Michael of barely making prints in the snow foreshadowing his enormous plan and sacrifice. Very nice!

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clair_de_lune December 19 2007, 16:09:16 UTC
Thanks a lot. I'm a bit frustrated with this series of drabbles because they don't feel very "christmasty" - and I wanted them to be christmasty ^^ - but I nevertheless like this one.

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