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ckll

My new WC fic

Feb 24, 2011 07:38

Title: Watching
Author: ckll
Pairing: Neal/Peter
Rating: PG
Summary: Neal and Peter are watching each other since the day they met.
Beta by kajmere

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Comments 29

coffeethyme4me February 25 2011, 23:39:32 UTC

I love the framework of this...that they each go into deep thoughts of the other only to catch themselves being watched. That was brilliant! I also love the little observations -- that Peter's physique is like Peter's father but his personality isn't, that when Neal says he's bored he means lonely. Really well-done!!!

ckll February 26 2011, 03:24:09 UTC

*bounces*
Thank you sooooooooo much for reading. I'm really proud of this story.

coffeethyme4me February 26 2011, 03:28:13 UTC

I meant *Neal's* father! My fingers don't always do what they're told by my brain. ;-)

ckll February 26 2011, 03:36:53 UTC

I know what you meant :)

sara_tsuzuki February 26 2011, 01:18:17 UTC

Yay!!! So sweet!

ckll February 26 2011, 03:24:28 UTC

Thank you hun :D

agarfa February 27 2011, 16:04:50 UTC

Such a great piece!! Love reading it!:)

ckll February 27 2011, 16:10:33 UTC

Thank you SO much!

shelley6441 February 28 2011, 18:29:05 UTC

Awwww! They need each other so much. Thank you for this.

And I like your icon - I can tell that Matty likes animals, just like the doggie who plays Satchmo.

ckll February 28 2011, 18:57:50 UTC

Thank YOU for reading :D
Matty is a beautiful, sensitive guy :D