The point of the previous sentences wasn't a question of which (if any) versions sound best. I wouldn't use any of them in anything I wrote. The question involves what can be taken out and still keep the sentence acceptable. When you spend as much time poking and prodding at sentences to figure out the limits, sometimes it puts your own
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But I am rereading your Nano from before, and editing it. ;-P
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I am not much for fiction writing. Non-fiction would be a breeze.
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I go to the Nano forums and read the dare threads for inspiration.
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I'm thinking scuba diving adventures...
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