[Fic] The Agency: Troubles Compounded

Feb 20, 2011 13:23

Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dancing The Night Away
Rating: M
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Author's Note: For summary, category, disclaimer and warnings, see Chapter One. You all can thank obsessive_a101 for this chapter being posted now. I wasn't going to give it to you for at least another day, but apparently I'm horribly corrupt because I was ( Read more... )

laura roslin, bill adama, adama/roslin, battlestar, fanfiction

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bsg_aussiegirl February 20 2011, 04:51:37 UTC
OH NOES! Too late!!!

I love all of Laura's secret hiding spots beneath her dress and Bill ogling them all. Too funny!

Now I can't wait for the next chapter and how our heroes will get out of this one!

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cj_quickwit February 20 2011, 11:04:54 UTC
It does present a problem, doesn't it?

I suppose we'll find out how - or if - they get out of it soon ... though I would, perhaps, just a little, be persuaded to post sooner in exchange for, oh I don't know ... maybe another chapter of AA? Since I've just caught up with it and all :p

Since my corruption has become so obvious, I'm going to welcome all and any bribes shamelessly. Even, perhaps, just, say, 100 words ;D

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bsg_aussiegirl February 20 2011, 11:26:45 UTC
Ugh. I have written a new chapter of AA, but I can't get the last scene to work. Driving me nuts.

You can't have caught up with everything I've written yet!? I'm a frakking machine! LOL Have you read the fic on adams_verse? Or the many many many 100 words on ar_drabbles?

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cj_quickwit February 20 2011, 12:17:28 UTC
Slow down! WTF? Just how much have you written while I've been gone?! Mental, you are, writing so much. Where do you get the energy? OMG! YOU'RE A CYLON!

No, I have not read it ALL yet. Though I've heard of the Adams verse somewhere ... hmm, someone must've mentioned to me. And, guh, you are teh drabble QUEEN. Heh, Drab Queen. That's icon material.

Am still catching up, but getting there. Would still love, love, love some more AA, as it's so frakking fantastic I want to steal your brain. But I suppose leading me to many many many 100 words will do :p Will move my schedule up a day, just for you, dear. Cause you frakking astound me.

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ufp13 February 20 2011, 04:57:19 UTC
NEW CHAPTER! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

Oh, Richard... you gotta learn that Laura pwns all. Even you.

Bill to the rescue. YEAH! They got around to dance. *bounces*

Leoben... oy... that guy's always trouble... :-/

I looooove that she has weapons and lil tools stuffed everywhere despite appearing like a harmless (well, as harmless as secksy Laura can be) woman.

... oh, he's obviously trouble indeed! That's one evil cliffhanger, dear!

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cj_quickwit February 20 2011, 11:12:25 UTC
I haven't decided yet whether or not Richard will have to learn his lesson the hard way. I'm not sure there's a place for it in the sequel yet - though if there is, I'd totally love to watch her beat down the most powerful man in the Colonies. Would be well hot.

And yes. The cliffhanger is decidedly evil. I even had my own little wicked overlord smirk when I finished it there. More soon though. Wouldn't leave you hanging for too long. Just a little long.

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ufp13 February 21 2011, 06:43:15 UTC
Ooooooooooh! I'd LOVE to see that. :D *crosses fingers quickwit will find space for it*

HUUUUUUURRY! ;D

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obsessive_a101 February 20 2011, 16:46:43 UTC
OMGOSH! YAY! CHAPPIE!

And OHNOES! (O_O) CLIFFHANGER! *stares dumbstruck*

... *curls up into a fetal position*

Okay, regaining my dignity/coherence/sanity for a moment, I love it! :D (But then again, you probably already knew that. LOL - I AM getting repetitive.) The face-off and pwnage by Laura with Laura and Richard in this chapter was SO ripe with potential. It's amazing, and OH Bill.

Edited to add: AH! Almost forgot - WONDER!TWINS! So this chapter was a DOUBLE cliffhanger... >>"

I love how they are already working so well in sync, and Bill's inability to stop eying her (not that I blame him AT ALL).

AND OH! Favorite! “You’re a terrifying woman, Laura Roslin,” he commented, meeting her eyes and grinning. “Unarmed and in that dress and all. That’s kinda sexy.”If only because, "OH BILL, IF ONLY YOU KNEW WHAT SHE HAD HIDDEN..." which I already suspected at the time. XD No, self-preserving secret agent would ever go into a situation unprepared. Never mind the fact that, according to Cottle, she knows how to kill a man with her ( ... )

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cj_quickwit February 21 2011, 00:32:15 UTC
Trust me when I say, it wasn't a big leap to corruption. You're just the one responsible for the final nudge.

Oh, look at all the pretty colours my morals make as they burn!

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obsessive_a101 February 21 2011, 01:21:30 UTC
*considers... then takes out camera*

I think the colours would look great as artsy decor. I love pretty flames. :)

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cavgirl February 20 2011, 17:22:17 UTC
OMG it's Laura Roslin crossed with James Bond and Amelia Peabody! Apparently buns are useful things to have. If a hairpin won't do the trick, you can hide a whole arsenal of items.... LOL.

Looking forward to more, as soon as you can manage it!

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cj_quickwit February 21 2011, 00:36:25 UTC
You really truly can. Seriously, my wand holster broke, and so now when I'm in my Hogwarts uniform, I use my wand to hold up my hair. The things you can stash in a bun is awesome.

I just read that back to myself. I'm such a geek lol.

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cavgirl February 21 2011, 00:41:05 UTC
Isn't that rather confining when it comes to casting, or have you mastered wandless magic? Flitwick must be so pleased! :) The wand trick wouldn't work for my hair. I'm like Jo March - 19 hairpins and most of them sticking straight into my head. That's why I went back to bands and baubles. Less painful.

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cj_quickwit February 21 2011, 00:57:02 UTC
Of course I've mastered wandless. I'm not going to take over the wizarding world being confined to a wand. Or I just whip it out and look all hot and that while I'm fighting, hair raining down and ...

Yeah, totally going to have to write some more Disclaimer series crack, I think.

I don't mind a few bobby pins. In fact, I'm firm in my belief that all a girl really needs to get by is her wand and a few bobby pins.

And yes, that could totally be taken out of context *snickers* But I seriously didn't mean it that way.

~ Gah, all my HP icons are way too serious for the this conversation. I have to use my secksy!Emma one. Not that I mind, terribly, but still, will have to go icon hunting and stop myself from getting sidetracked by all the dark pretties ~

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miabicicletta February 21 2011, 00:19:44 UTC
I think the only person thinking dirtier things than Bill when confronted with sexyspy!Laura and her Dress of Many Wonders is me. It's cool. I'm okay with that.

Awesome job with this. Oh Laura, just give in. Hasn't your super awesome rainbow magic intel informed you that Bill is the best lover in all the Twelve Colonies? You need to get on the internets more, girl. Loved Madame D hiding a small arsenal among her already considerable assets. Amazing the things a little T&A will veil.

And only because you are getting shameless with the Laura oogling do I forgive that "Fuck you, Dear Readers, bwhahahahaha" ending there. That is One-level evilness.

Question -- how many chapters to go in The Agency? Man. I'm so curious to know what else is coming. Where are the Eights and Ones and Threes? Does my favorite terrorist Tom Zarek show up? What about Chief? When does Tigh get to start bossing recruits around?! I can haz Samuel T Anders?

Rock on, Magmalicious.

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cj_quickwit February 21 2011, 00:45:33 UTC
Yes, I know I don't really get to be the one using this icon as I am said whore, but I love it too much and don't get enough chances to use it.

This chapter was posted with the absolute minimum of evil laughter. But really, there had to be at least some.

The first Agency fic has 32 chapters. So 3 to go. Woah. Even I didn't realize we were so close to the end. Then I'll be taking a little break, and then the sequel will be yours to tear apart.

No other Cylon's planned yet (in this one or the next ... I won't commit myself to it, but trilogy, anyone?) Tigh will have a more active roll next fic and as for Zarek, we'll see.

Sam Anders is yours, dear. Though I may need to borrow him back, so don't break him. Badly. Nothing we can't glue and solder back together, anyhow.

Btw: super awesome rainbow magic intel? Win.

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