[Fic] The Agency: Troubles Compounded

[cj_quickwit]

Chapter Twenty-Four: What Will Come
Rating: M
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Author's Note: For summary, categories, disclaimer and warnings, see Chapter One. You guys! So frakking forgiving. Best fandom ever. It's so good to be back.

Because you deserve it ...

Comments

[ufp13]

ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! *BOUNCES*
You're totally spoiling us! (not that I'm complaining ;D)

Oooooh Elosha! I reaaaaally like that woman. She and Laura have such a great dynamic.

Torturing Leoban? I'm all for it. *nodnod* (does that make me a bad person? o.O)

[cj_quickwit]

A little bit of torture here and there is perfectly acceptable, so long as it's for a good cause. Then again, I'm somewhat skewed, morally, so maybe I'm not the best person to ask :p

*loves Elosha* There's certainly something to be said for the only-a-little-creepy-but-in-a-good-way mystical type.

And you guys deserve to be spoiled, since I've been horribly naughty the past ... almost a frakking year.

[ufp13]

SSWA! :D

Good things come to those who wait. There's obviously some truth to the saying. *gg*

[longlivelaura]

Well, looks like I'm gonna hafta start logging onto LJ more regularly because I do not want to miss one of your updates.

I have to say again, in case you've forgotten in your absence, how much I love your Laura. She is so badass! I love the image of her dressing down Kara and Lee in the last chapter and her continued intimidation of them here. And hell yes she's gonna torture Leoben - 'cuz she's badass like that.

Yet there's a subtle sadness, a hidden depth, to your Laura which rings true to the many layers of the Laura Roslin we know from Galactica.

So, I'm still loving this and looking forward to whatever you've got in store for us. Keep on keepin' on, lol.

[cj_quickwit]

Like an onion, our Laura. All layers and a core that makes you cry. And you know that onions are the badass' of the vegetable world.

[obsessive_a101]

I'm going to run into cliches here and say - It's like the gift that keeps on giving. LOL!

But this was a really intriguing chapter. I loved the scene between Laura and Elosha, and the small hints to Laura's past. I love the complications and the moral dilemmas, and of course, I love the action. :)

That said, I can't wait to see more! YAY! *spoiled person is VERY happy*

[cj_quickwit]

I'm a big fan of cliches.

[miabicicletta]

It really must be said how fabulous (or mindbogglingly frustrating) your pacing it. Why do I get the sense that maybe Laura's family suffered a different fate than being killed in car crash? You are masterful at throwing out crumbs while keeping the narrative focused.

You've taken so many great parts of the series and tossed them in a blender, and I love that we're about to see a version of the Baltar interrogation, but maybe also the dancing during Colonial Day? Gosh, it's so completely different and yet so familiar at the same time. Totally brilliant. I love Laura so much in this universe, particularly the way Cottle describes her a few chapters back. I cannot emphasize how thrilled I am that this series is back.

I just hope Bill gets a little further than second base sometime soon :D

Keep it up, lady! Like I said, amazing, masterful work.

[cj_quickwit]

The pacing is certainly about to pick up some. We're closer to the end than the beginning now.

I have to play with the Baltar interrogation. I loved that whole scene in the show. So frakked it was perfect. There's nothing quite like psychological torture. As for the dancing ... you'll see.

And I may make ya'll wait a long time for Bill to round the bases. Way more fun when it's dragged out.

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I should probably leave a proper review tonight. Instead of simply jumping around the loungeroom. *snort*

That first paragraph? Whoa. Fantastic.

I loved your Elosha. I love how sassy she is. Being insulted that Laura might talk to another priest and telling her it's a load of crap. Hee. I also love all the little bits of canon you weaved into that discussion.

The President's Ball? Can never go wrong with Laura and Bill dancing! Looking forward to it!

[cj_quickwit]

And I totally didn't pick a ball just so I could get Bill in a tux. No. Not at all *shifty look*