Fic - The Butterfly Effect 8/9

[cj2017]

Title: The Butterfly Effect (8/9)

Rating: Hard R: violence, sex, harsh language, you probably know the drill by now.

Comments

[phantomwriter05]

very nice ...

it worked out quite well so far ...

lets see how the next chapter goes though ;)

[cj2017]

LOL. Would you believe me if I told you it was all coming to a nice peaceful conclusion?

[fig_aruna]

Intense! I could totally see the cinematic version of this chapter, complete with riveting music and quick, interspliced cuts to T1. Crazy cool.

I think Zach might need to be in an infirmary for a good stint though!

[cj2017]

I could totally see the cinematic version of this chapter, complete with riveting music and quick, interspliced cuts to T1.

Yeah, as if Sarah doesn't have enough fuel for her nightmares, I go and give one of her very first ones a little re-jig.

I think Zach might need to be in an infirmary for a good stint though!

Pah! Hospitals are for wimps *g* Yeah, I kinda fudged that issue, you might just have to give me a pass on it ;-)

[gothamite66]

:D

Had some memories of T1 mixed in with this episode. :D

I think I may be sad when I finish the story. I think you'll need to write more.

[cj2017]

Had some memories of T1 mixed in with this episode. :D

Yeah, that was intentional ;-) I figured if there was one thing that'd make Sarah have a bit of a freak-out it'd be half an endoskeleton dragging its way towards her...

I think I may be sad when I finish the story. I think you'll need to write more.

Heh. I'm onto it. Got about 9000 words done at the moment. It was slow going for a while, I think this one wiped me out a bit, but I have a plan and seem to have been on a bit of a roll the last few days. I have no clue when it'll be finished but I am working on it!

[lamaudite]

Finally catching up. Slow spell at work and the luxury of a smart phone, would you believe. I liked this one. It's like I had been holding my breath all this time. :)