I have to say that I'm happy that your writting Sarah and John a little closer. My one complaint other than no Jameron (but I respect that) was that Sarah and John were not connecting as much as they should.
I have to say that I'm happy that your writing Sarah and John a little closer.
Happy that you're happy :-) They had some nice stuff towards the start of the fic as well. I wanted Sarah to consciously be trying to defer to John in this one, to try and follow his lead, his choices. To continue that opening her hands theme from the end of Breaking Point. But then, she'd only take that so far. Soon as the bullets start to fly, that's the time when her instincts kick in. She'll only let him take the lead up to a point...but she is trying.
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I have to say that I'm happy that your writting Sarah and John a little closer. My one complaint other than no Jameron (but I respect that) was that Sarah and John were not connecting as much as they should.
But you have corrected that gloriously ...
good job
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Heh, thought they'd got away with it, did ya?
I have to say that I'm happy that your writing Sarah and John a little closer.
Happy that you're happy :-) They had some nice stuff towards the start of the fic as well. I wanted Sarah to consciously be trying to defer to John in this one, to try and follow his lead, his choices. To continue that opening her hands theme from the end of Breaking Point. But then, she'd only take that so far. Soon as the bullets start to fly, that's the time when her instincts kick in. She'll only let him take the lead up to a point...but she is trying.
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Talk to U soon.
T.
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You didn't seriously think they were just gonna drive straight on out of there did you?
*happy sigh* I think that's probably my favourite cliff-hanger ;-)
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(LOL!)
You outdid yourself on this one, CJ >;)
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In which case, I think I love ya a little ;-)
What was it Derek said... oh yeah: “Nothing’s ever fucking easy, is it?”
*g*
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:P
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