Fic - The Butterfly Effect 7/9

Jun 23, 2010 20:28



Title: The Butterfly Effect (7/9)

Rating: Hard R: violence, sex, harsh language, you probably know the drill by now.

The Butterfly Effect (7/9) )

fic, sarah connor chronicles

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phantomwriter05 June 23 2010, 21:06:13 UTC
What a twist!!

I have to say that I'm happy that your writting Sarah and John a little closer. My one complaint other than no Jameron (but I respect that) was that Sarah and John were not connecting as much as they should.

But you have corrected that gloriously ...

good job

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cj2017 June 24 2010, 08:36:22 UTC
What a twist!!

Heh, thought they'd got away with it, did ya?

I have to say that I'm happy that your writing Sarah and John a little closer.

Happy that you're happy :-) They had some nice stuff towards the start of the fic as well. I wanted Sarah to consciously be trying to defer to John in this one, to try and follow his lead, his choices. To continue that opening her hands theme from the end of Breaking Point. But then, she'd only take that so far. Soon as the bullets start to fly, that's the time when her instincts kick in. She'll only let him take the lead up to a point...but she is trying.

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Last minute snatch and run... tackdriver56 June 23 2010, 22:49:39 UTC
Thanks Caroline... it's coming in the car.

Talk to U soon.

T.

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fig_aruna June 24 2010, 04:41:12 UTC

... )

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cj2017 June 24 2010, 08:44:22 UTC
L
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You didn't seriously think they were just gonna drive straight on out of there did you?

*happy sigh* I think that's probably my favourite cliff-hanger ;-)

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fig_aruna June 24 2010, 18:15:32 UTC
Actually, I did... *pushes index fingers together while digging toe into dirt*

(LOL!)

You outdid yourself on this one, CJ >;)

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cj2017 June 25 2010, 07:11:22 UTC
Actually, I did... *pushes index fingers together while digging toe into dirt*

In which case, I think I love ya a little ;-)

What was it Derek said... oh yeah: “Nothing’s ever fucking easy, is it?”

*g*

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gothamite66 July 16 2010, 20:13:07 UTC
Hehehe, another cliffhanger and another lunch break over. Curses.

:P

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