Here are three ficlets, all Brian/Nick, of the six promised to inadownpour in return for making these lovely icons! Not nearly as soon as I thought they would be finished... but three more are coming!
Of course Nick and Baylee conspire together to scare Brian, of course!
I like the second one particularly - very vivid atmosphere, very vivid Nick.
I get a bit confused by the dialogue in the third one - the way you've laid it out it looks as though Nick is talking to himself-if you did the paragraphs differently it'd be easier to navigate.
Hm... Brian as Nick's imaginary friend? Another fic(let), perhaps! lol Thank you very much though! Hm, I think handling dialogue has always been the hardest thing for me, as a writer. I'll go back and edit this when I have more time, but thank you!!
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I like the second one particularly - very vivid atmosphere, very vivid Nick.
I get a bit confused by the dialogue in the third one - the way you've laid it out it looks as though Nick is talking to himself-if you did the paragraphs differently it'd be easier to navigate.
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Hm... Brian as Nick's imaginary friend? Another fic(let), perhaps! lol Thank you very much though! Hm, I think handling dialogue has always been the hardest thing for me, as a writer. I'll go back and edit this when I have more time, but thank you!!
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