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Oct 19, 2009 01:12

Here are three ficlets, all Brian/Nick, of the six promised to inadownpour in return for making these lovely icons! Not nearly as soon as I thought they would be finished... but three more are coming!

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my fic, brian/nick

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pensnest October 19 2009, 09:07:28 UTC
Of course Nick and Baylee conspire together to scare Brian, of course!

I like the second one particularly - very vivid atmosphere, very vivid Nick.

I get a bit confused by the dialogue in the third one - the way you've laid it out it looks as though Nick is talking to himself-if you did the paragraphs differently it'd be easier to navigate.

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citruslover October 22 2009, 03:53:11 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting!

Hm... Brian as Nick's imaginary friend? Another fic(let), perhaps! lol Thank you very much though! Hm, I think handling dialogue has always been the hardest thing for me, as a writer. I'll go back and edit this when I have more time, but thank you!!

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nopseud October 19 2009, 11:18:17 UTC
Oh, all three of those are lovely :-)

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citruslover October 22 2009, 03:46:48 UTC
Thank you!

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rikes October 26 2009, 11:25:19 UTC
Awww, so cute! ♥

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citruslover October 30 2009, 02:38:00 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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citruslover November 7 2009, 03:44:32 UTC
Yay, glad you enjoyed! :D

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