This is sooooo sad!!! I do think Dean can use some leasons on empathy and communication....realizing he is just a teenager...but, wow! Poor Cas!!! Also not knowing how to communicate and feeling entrapped inside of his body...so powerless. Poor Dean blaming himself and Cas feeling alone :( This is sad! Can't wait for the next chapter and for them to get closer and having a "healtier" relationship!
They are both definitely having trouble communicating. And yeah, Castiel is definitely lonely :( and has major trouble trying to figure out that Dean CARES about him.
Seriously, half the time I cannot even follow part of Castiel's train of thought, but I just fucking love it. I love how it's written, and how Dean reacts to him.
"Then why do I feel like my heart has stopped beating? Not everything must be because of the pills..."
I had a hard time near the end coz I got super depressed about how crap my writing was. It happens to me sometimes. It's very annoying. Then I get hold of myself and power through, coz it's really just practice.
Anyway, your comments always make me smile :) *smooches and huggles you*
Your writing, my dear citizencandy, is anything but crap! *scolds*
*clings and becomes like a Bennyblanket* You get the first ever Bennyblanket! :D Also, I am so superexcited for more. >> I may have been stalking you slightly as I waited for this part.
Sorry for the delay. This part just didnt come as easily as the others; had to really give a lot of thought to Cas's inner mind and reactions. Glad it paid off ^^
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Thanks for your thoughts :)
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That. Was. Fantastic.
Seriously, half the time I cannot even follow part of Castiel's train of thought, but I just fucking love it. I love how it's written, and how Dean reacts to him.
"Then why do I feel like my heart has stopped beating? Not everything must be because of the pills..."
Yes.
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I had a hard time near the end coz I got super depressed about how crap my writing was. It happens to me sometimes. It's very annoying. Then I get hold of myself and power through, coz it's really just practice.
Anyway, your comments always make me smile :) *smooches and huggles you*
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*clings and becomes like a Bennyblanket* You get the first ever Bennyblanket! :D Also, I am so superexcited for more. >> I may have been stalking you slightly as I waited for this part.
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Yay! A stalker!Bennyblanket fresh off the market!
Sorry for the delay. This part just didnt come as easily as the others; had to really give a lot of thought to Cas's inner mind and reactions. Glad it paid off ^^
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Thanks!
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Can't wait for more.
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Thanks!
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