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uwalumni2 November 20 2010, 18:18:58 UTC
This is sooooo sad!!! I do think Dean can use some leasons on empathy and communication....realizing he is just a teenager...but, wow! Poor Cas!!! Also not knowing how to communicate and feeling entrapped inside of his body...so powerless. Poor Dean blaming himself and Cas feeling alone :( This is sad! Can't wait for the next chapter and for them to get closer and having a "healtier" relationship!

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 20:01:42 UTC
They are both definitely having trouble communicating. And yeah, Castiel is definitely lonely :( and has major trouble trying to figure out that Dean CARES about him.

Thanks for your thoughts :)

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earth_heart November 20 2010, 18:28:25 UTC
*eyes glaze over*

That. Was. Fantastic.

Seriously, half the time I cannot even follow part of Castiel's train of thought, but I just fucking love it. I love how it's written, and how Dean reacts to him.

"Then why do I feel like my heart has stopped beating? Not everything must be because of the pills..."

Yes.

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 20:09:29 UTC
Aw, thank yooh ! :3

I had a hard time near the end coz I got super depressed about how crap my writing was. It happens to me sometimes. It's very annoying. Then I get hold of myself and power through, coz it's really just practice.

Anyway, your comments always make me smile :) *smooches and huggles you*

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earth_heart November 20 2010, 20:34:53 UTC
Your writing, my dear citizencandy, is anything but crap! *scolds*

*clings and becomes like a Bennyblanket* You get the first ever Bennyblanket! :D Also, I am so superexcited for more. >> I may have been stalking you slightly as I waited for this part.

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 20:57:58 UTC
Then you, my dear, have crap taste. :d

Yay! A stalker!Bennyblanket fresh off the market!

Sorry for the delay. This part just didnt come as easily as the others; had to really give a lot of thought to Cas's inner mind and reactions. Glad it paid off ^^

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mulder200 November 20 2010, 19:10:46 UTC
Wow! Poor Cas has some serious issues. And Poor Dean as well. Being involved with someone with mental issues cannot be easy to handle at all.

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 20:11:21 UTC
I agree, it's draining Dean, but it's having a good effect on Castiel, so his leaving is a bad thing, really.

Thanks!

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ebonyfeather November 20 2010, 20:15:22 UTC
Oh no! Here I was, hoping for a lovely happy reunion...

Can't wait for more.

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 20:50:20 UTC
The happy ending must be earned, my dear ;)

Thanks!

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serenada_art November 20 2010, 20:52:29 UTC
Well, I have no idea how this is going to turn out, but I can't wait to see.

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citizencandy November 20 2010, 21:00:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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