Comments | cisaac: Fic: Emergence, Chapter 7 + Epilogue (Part 2/2)

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Fic: Emergence, Chapter 7 + Epilogue (Part 2/2)

Oct 30, 2008 10:23

Title: Emergence, Chapter 7 + Epilogue
Author: C. Isaac
Words: ~6000
Cast: Ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own TSCC or anything associated with it.
Author's Notes: Due to posting size limitations and inherent issues with LiveJournal's new posting application in FireFox, I am cutting this up between two posts.

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terminator, science fiction, emergence, fanfic, tscc

Comments 3

indiefic February 17 2009, 20:08:42 UTC

He reached for the beer and his fingers had circled the bottle when he felt the cool metal against the side of his head.

“Sarah,” he said.

Heh. Perfect illustration of their dynamic there.

If you want to do it, you do it. Man up and admit you just want me dead and pull the fucking trigger.

I love this.

Sarah slapped the hand away before it came too close and the stony mask returned to her features. A hard stare forced Derek back a step.

“You can stay,” she said. “But no more of this. Not again. No one dies until I say so from this point. If you go off the reservation again, it’ll be me you have to watch out for. Do you understand?”

He could only nod before she turned and walked away.

LOVED THAT!!!

KYLE REESE

Block letters now filled part of the first space between the blue lines on the page. That was the first name he knew, but it would not be the last one on this page. He prayed that very few would require the strokes of his pencil.

Nice full circle there.

Derek had killed and Cameron had shown mercy. What sort of world ( ... )

cisaac February 17 2009, 20:44:16 UTC

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it all and I'm happy you made it it all the way to the end. It was a lot of work, but it was rewarding, and seeing the feedback makes it even more rewarding.

azure_orbis March 13 2012, 06:35:36 UTC

Wow. Looking back to where this all started and where your trilogy is leaving off, the story's grown so amazingly, from fleshing out all those storylines that were only hinted at and then expanding them, tying them together and viola, this amazing ending. I really love the changes the characters have gone through - it feels organic and plausible and real ( ... )