Fanfiction: Buffy

[circusfreak_88]

Eden

Pairing: Buffy/Faith
Rating: Biblical
Summary: Blind faith and false prophets: from Helpless to Consequences, bypassing The Zeppo.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
A/N: Leave comments, they make me happy.

It started with a needle.

His betrayal to her was written all over his face. He explained tradition, he explained protocol and he explained the failed

Comments

[sapphire_magick]

This is unlike your other writings. There is so much depth and biblical references in this one that I can't help but wonder what was on your mind when you wrote this.

I like how you avoided using names. A very wonderfully written fic.

[circusfreak_88]

The cloven hoof, ancient evil, ancient power. Original sin, the apple from the tree the betrayal of man by the woman and the snake. Back to the poison, to the Watcher and his Council. Back to the girl.

It was that line; I then went with that an ran with it. Going over and placing more Old Testament references within it (I had to google a lot of it, my Torah knowlege forgotten).
I wasn't sure if removing pro-nouns would lead to confusion and so I'm glad you liked it.
More fuffy to come; I'm so into Whedon right now its unreal.

[sapphire_magick]

Old Testament references

No wonder I didn't get some of it... I knew it was something from the bible, but that's about all I know. My english tutor got me to learn some stuff from the testament in relation to my Buffy analysis in my last year of high school but i was stubborn and only learnt very little. I didn't think it was relevant to learn something from the bible when it's only Buffy. Lol. And now that you wrote this and it triggered the memory and... I sort of get the connection now. Ironic, huh?

I wasn't sure if removing pro-nouns would lead to confusion and so I'm glad you liked it.

Required more brain cells than usual to distinguished who you're actually referring to at times but otherwise, I like it!

More fuffy to come

YES FUCKING YES!!!! *fangirl squeeeeee* You don't know how long I've been waiting for you to say that!!!

[circusfreak_88]

You know I have started chapter three of your happy fuffy bedtime story... Its about a paragraph long - but its started!! You know me I'm not very good at series... I get bored.