This fic was so beautiful and sad and wonderful!!!! I wanted to cry several times for Harry and Scorpius. I was dying to just lock them in a room together.
The time line was a little confusing at first but once I sorted itout, it was easy to follow.
The end conversation was wonderful and sweet!!! I love it so much, and wanted to hug poor Sorpius.
Did we ever find out what happened to him that day to get him so upset?
Their last declarations to each other in the kitchen are so beautiful. I keep rereading that part. :)
I'd considered marking the timeline, with bits like Six months earlier, etc. But these things often annoy me when I come across them in a story. It always seems to imply to me that the author thinks Im to stupid, or something, to understand the fic without help. I like to think of my readers as intelligent people, who are capable of figuring me out. :)
No, I never said what, exactly, upset Scorpius. In the end, it didn't really matter. In the first draft, he'd met with Rose. She was supposed to be his BFF, and they'd meet and bitch to each other about their respective partners, and Rose was supposed to have said something that confirmed Scorpius's suspicions, something like, "Sounds like he's having an affair." But Rose didn't fit with the rest of the story, and so she and her stupid comment were deleted.
Glad you liked the kitchen conversation. I admit, I got a bit teary-eyed when I wrote it. ;)
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The time line was a little confusing at first but once I sorted itout, it was easy to follow.
The end conversation was wonderful and sweet!!! I love it so much, and wanted to hug poor Sorpius.
Did we ever find out what happened to him that day to get him so upset?
Their last declarations to each other in the kitchen are so beautiful. I keep rereading that part. :)
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I'd considered marking the timeline, with bits like Six months earlier, etc. But these things often annoy me when I come across them in a story. It always seems to imply to me that the author thinks Im to stupid, or something, to understand the fic without help. I like to think of my readers as intelligent people, who are capable of figuring me out. :)
No, I never said what, exactly, upset Scorpius. In the end, it didn't really matter. In the first draft, he'd met with Rose. She was supposed to be his BFF, and they'd meet and bitch to each other about their respective partners, and Rose was supposed to have said something that confirmed Scorpius's suspicions, something like, "Sounds like he's having an affair." But Rose didn't fit with the rest of the story, and so she and her stupid comment were deleted.
Glad you liked the kitchen conversation. I admit, I got a bit teary-eyed when I wrote it. ;)
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