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cindyanne1

Poverty Challenge: the Less Family

Aug 29, 2008 13:52

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cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 11:02:14 UTC

I agree! She's been getting her way far too much, hasn't she? ;)

abbycat900 August 29 2008, 19:16:33 UTC

MUST YOU MAKE ME POUND MY KEYS IN FRUSTRATION?

I love this story so much, I'm never quite sure what character I'm mad at XD

All I know is that its NOT Eric. Eh, not Heart so much either. There was just a LITTLE tiny part where I thought she was going to do something stupid. Gah, Dream, you evil little monkey XD

cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 11:04:27 UTC

Yes, Eric is quite the innocent in all of this. Caught in the cross fire of Dream's goal to make Heart miserable.

Just curious... when was the part that you thought Heart was going to do something stupid? :P I gotta know!

abbycat900 August 30 2008, 15:31:21 UTC

For a second...

Heart: “Wait. Are you saying you did have sex with her? Eric! How could you? How could you do something like that!”

I thought Heart would be blaming Eric as well. 'Course, it would make sense, seeing as she didn't know what was happening, I'm only judging from an outsider xD But then she didn't and I went 'Whew!'

cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 15:59:23 UTC

Hee hee... I was wondering if it was that or if it was when she *almost* had sex with him there at the end, or if it was when she pushed him away at the end and *didn't* have sex with him. :D So many confused emotions in this scene, lol!

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forestpixie August 29 2008, 19:36:36 UTC

That was a quick update, despite the AL excitement. :)

This story is so... dare I say it... heart-wrenching.

You really know how to spin a compelling tale.

cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 11:05:51 UTC

See I told you I wouldn't be able to stay away for long. ;)

Thank you for reading!

redqueenofevil August 29 2008, 19:36:46 UTC

Ahh, Dream! She's really got Eric in a corner. I'm glad Heart is bright enough to see that Dream was just manipulating him. And the realization about rape- very touching, actually. If only because of the realism.

Good work. And probably the last thing I'll read on LJ until Monday.

cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 11:09:30 UTC

Thank you for reading!! Hope you have a great weekend!

emmmkayyyy August 29 2008, 21:21:13 UTC

I hate dream. I know I say that every time. But this time she totally hit a chord that I do not fancy being hit. I can't wait till she's knocked up and Heart grows some balls to kick her out. I can see her as a smoker stuck with a kid and no job. I know its mean but its the truth. She's a bitch.

cindyanne1 August 30 2008, 11:10:29 UTC

Dream is a total bitch, I agree! And as for the baby drama... stay tuned! ;)