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therealesther October 28 2010, 01:20:06 UTC
*hyper-ventilating*

HOLYCOWKEYSMASH

SO MANY PARTS OF THIS I JUST LOVED LIKE HOMGNESS CALM DOWNum whut right yeah um.

like, right from the beginning, archie eating breakfast, asking cook to sit with him in this pleading way OMGNESS I WAS HOOKED and cook admitting to michael and michael being like "DUH" I LOVE MICHAEL

but omgness i LOVE CLAUDIA!!! AWESOME BIG SISTER OMGNESS XDDDDD "EVERYTHING." haahahahahaha AWESOME

and like, like, the awkward dating and archie reminding himself that it's not new, not really, it's a continuation of their relationship BEAUTIFUL!!!

and I THOUGHT THIS WAS THE ONLY PART YOU'D WRITTEN SO FAR, SO I WAS LIKE stop the capslock abuse stop it now.

i mean, i was legit reading extra slow so that the end would never come, and then i see "on to part two" and my face went XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

ahem.

so now.

i am going on to part two.

ps. you're awesome.

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therealesther October 28 2010, 01:33:53 UTC
i am such an idiot, i forgot the most awesome part!!!

"He just wasn’t sure “Archie said yes” would be a valid excuse, or at least not one that didn’t require a whole lot more explanation than he was actually prepared to give at the moment."

oh man. oh man. can you IMAGINE. "Archie said yes"

we could forgive ANYTHING for that tweet. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

i may have screamed just imagining it.

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cinderlily October 30 2010, 04:29:55 UTC
Haha. If I can help it I avoid doing things in shifts because I always second guess myself crazy so you will very rarely find giving you a Part One without an immediate Part Two. :)

But oh my gosh, OH MY GOSH. Seriously. You just... I don't even know where to start? I love that you caught all these parts that I put in with hopes that at least someone would see it and you saw them ALL. IN THE FIRST COMMENT. LORD.

IF HE TWEETED "ARCHIE SAID YES" WITH OR WITHOUT CONTEXT? I WOULD OWE THEM A BABY. OR ELEVEN. LORD.

But thank you, thank you so much!! ♥

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asweetdownfall December 30 2010, 06:49:47 UTC
akfklsdjflaisdkjflw dsf I am incapable of writing anything coherent. So I'll just say this:

LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. I've missed your writing so. <3

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