I'm happy to hear that you feel that paragraph summed up their relationship well. I was a little uncertain about it when I wrote it, wondering if it was too out of the blue in a mostly humor piece, but I felt the story needed it. So I'm pleased to hear that you liked it. Thanks so much for leaving me feedback. I really appreciate it.
I'm extremely pleased that you believed this, both plot and characterization. That means a lot to me. Thank you so much for letting me know what you think!
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But there were still those moments, where River looked at him and he felt unfinished.
Actually, that whole paragraph summed up their relationship beautifully. Well done!
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