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ayane42 February 18 2013, 22:46:40 UTC
really great story!!!

sneaky stuff in there!! chad's phone!! that was bugging me since chad picked jared up at the airport!!! a-ha!!!

awesome story!! loved it!!

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cillab42 February 18 2013, 22:52:29 UTC
I was trying to save it as close to then end as possible, so i'm glad it worked. Thanks for the love.

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ext_1658854 February 19 2013, 05:01:09 UTC
it was great. i could not stop reading. Very well writing. thank you for sharing your talent.

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cillab42 February 19 2013, 05:07:14 UTC
Thank you for the compliment and I am so glad that you enjoyed the story.

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shenova February 19 2013, 22:44:27 UTC
Brilliant story I was thinking that Chad may have had something to do with Jensen attack, good twist though. Poor Jensen he went through a lot and having Chads baby not in there plan but I think the guys will be okay.

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cillab42 February 20 2013, 01:54:12 UTC
I know poor Jensen, he still has a lot to go through don't you think? Thanks for the kind words.

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annabuffy February 20 2013, 02:48:47 UTC
What a story! I couldn't stop reading until the end.

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cillab42 February 20 2013, 03:04:05 UTC
What a great compliment! I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

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melitta4ever February 20 2013, 14:51:57 UTC
Thank gods for the happy ending. After going through all that detailed pain and suffering...
I liked the idea that how this horrible event brought a positive character growth. Yeay for Jensen.

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cillab42 February 20 2013, 16:36:30 UTC
I couldn't have him go through all of that and NOT have a happy ending. Thanks for the comment.

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