Comments | cieluna: First Son (3/7)

cieluna

First Son (3/7)

Jan 10, 2009 14:39

Patrick was forming a bad habit out of spewing unwanted bodily fluids on Pete’s clothing.

A veil of shocked silence descended upon everyone at the table. Even Pete was stunned, his eyes growing wide as bits of potato started sliding of his cheek and hair.

It was embarrassing enough that Patrick had to subject Pete to bloody hoodies and ( Read more... )

^ fanfiction: first son, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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black_vortex January 10 2009, 09:47:22 UTC

After being away for a few days, this is such a great thing to come back to. And that cliff hanger, I totally did not see that coming. I think I see *drama* coming up. How exciting.

cieluna January 10 2009, 14:47:01 UTC

The JWalk brings drama and he shall bring it good. Well, I mean. Never mind with the proper usage of English, haha!

Thank you so much :)

tbsavafob6 January 10 2009, 13:45:53 UTC

JWALK!

cieluna January 10 2009, 14:31:02 UTC

It would be blasphemous if I didn't put the JWalk, don't you think? :D

of_silverandsky January 10 2009, 14:24:36 UTC

I'm gonna die from laughing at the Way brothers.
And the ryden made me squee irl!

Oh oh oh and Jwalk! ♥__♥

idk if you even get what I actually meant in this comment but I'm gonna friend you now.

cieluna January 10 2009, 14:32:45 UTC

They're the bestestest ever. :D
I needed the Ryden too, it's like therapy. :))

JWalk should never not be in a fic, don't you agree?

I shall friend you baaaack :DD *hugs tight*
And I get exactly what you mean, I think we bandslash aficionados have our own language ;) :D

of_silverandsky January 10 2009, 14:42:04 UTC

Yes bevause Jon Walker is perfect~~~
V.V I'm so pathetic because I'm still flailing.

cieluna January 10 2009, 14:46:06 UTC

*nods fervently*

No you're not.
I wrote the stupid thing and I can't stop flailing myself.
now THAT'S pathetic.
LOL :))

*hugs*

chaaapstick January 10 2009, 15:08:37 UTC

Everyone loved the idea, even Spencer perked up as he decided that it would be a good idea to go as Jennifer Lopez’ first boyfriend.

This earned a snort from Bill, who said it would suit him even more if he went as Jennifer herself.

I lol'd hard. xDD

I love this story! Poor Patrick. :c

cieluna January 10 2009, 15:15:12 UTC

Spencer tends to internalize J. Lo, don't you think? :)) Haha!

Poor Patrick still has a looooong way to go D:
*hugs tight*
Thank you!!

outrageous_mo January 11 2009, 12:56:56 UTC

I ADORE gay Spencer >.

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cieluna January 12 2009, 11:31:43 UTC

YOU RULE IN COMMENTING, GIRL. :)))

JWalk brings the drama.
*evil laugh*
>:DDD

Thank you sooo much!! Hope you like my update! ;DD
LOVE TRIANGLES MAKE OUR WORLD SO MUCH MORE INTERESTING. XDD

If your friends had a baby, and it came out as a Patrick, I will so totally turn into a pedo.

/end creepy obsession plotting
:DD