First Son Sequel: Capitol Voice (1/7)

Jan 27, 2009 00:30

Title: Capitol Voice (1/7)
Pairings: Patrick/Pete, Ryan/Brendon, William/Gabe, Secret Pairings I shall name in future chapters, haha!
Summary: Sequel to First Son. It takes off just when the boys arrive in Washington for their gap year before entering college. The Way twins finally film their reality show, Panic launches themselves as the country's ( Read more... )

^ fanfiction: capitol voice, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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black_vortex January 27 2009, 06:37:19 UTC
Wow. Your writing feels different; but I can't say how so. I love the way this story has started, I can see so many possible directions and conflicts.I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens.

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cieluna January 29 2009, 15:17:30 UTC
Thank you so much. :)
I just changed the usage of tense that I usually write in and I hope it's better? ^^;
There's going to be a lot happening so I hope you stay for the entire ride! :D

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fidelian January 27 2009, 14:38:12 UTC
oh my dear, dear friend. you're trying to kill me with your awesomeness. this is probably the fifth time I read this chapter and I'll be damned if it doesn't just get better every time. :) I find myself falling in love with your spencer, he's such a diva.

i need more! get to it! *whips* ;)

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cieluna January 29 2009, 14:55:41 UTC
Fifth time?! I shall crown you with roses and poppies (because I like poppies. *shrugs*) for actually attempting it~ xD

I'll be right on replying to your email as soon as I find it. boo gmail. when I'm done beta-ing the rest of the chapter you sent me. :) But if you've added more to it, please send the updated one so I could work on that instead~ xD

*is whipped*
owwie.
i is updating.
.__.
:))

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of_silverandsky January 27 2009, 19:22:25 UTC
WHY YOU POSTED THIS WHEN I'M AWAY?
*flails*
cant leave any good comments~ my brain just melted from sheer happiness.

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cieluna January 29 2009, 14:43:06 UTC
IS SORRY! .___.
hopes you likes it tho.
c:

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of_silverandsky January 29 2009, 16:12:06 UTC
abso-fucking-lutely love it~

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anonymous January 27 2009, 19:47:31 UTC
Oh! Pete and... Mikey... interesting.

Poor Patrick, that bb is so screwed. I can't wait for more, I am very excited about this.

Different writing but I can't tell what the exact phrasing would be for it. It's good tho.

^-^

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cieluna January 29 2009, 15:08:40 UTC
Yes, I am determined to get all known bandom pairs into this story. That is how screwed-up I am. *doom* :))

Oh yes. Poor Patrick will stay screwed until.. well. yeah, pretty much forever.

Thank you! :) :D

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cieluna January 29 2009, 15:00:55 UTC
you think i can live without drama-rama?!
NUH-UH.
:))

i would get a lifetime subscription if it were a magazine. for realz.

and yes, Spencer is.. Well. Who doesn't love Spencer :))

Oooh, I spy a rebel in our midst. ;;)

punching his father won't be the smartest thing he's done. but, knowing pete, it isn't the dumbest thing either.

brendon and skipping go hand in hand, lol. sort of like ryan and anger management. one can't live without the other, haha!

oh thank god, i thought i was the only one who found that alpha line ridiculous :)) that was like my moment of sheer, literal, WTF-dom. :))

loves you baaaaack. ♥ ♥

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