Comments | cieluna: First Son Sequel: Capitol Voice (1/7)

cieluna

First Son Sequel: Capitol Voice (1/7)

Jan 27, 2009 00:30

Title: Capitol Voice (1/7)
Pairings: Patrick/Pete, Ryan/Brendon, William/Gabe, Secret Pairings I shall name in future chapters, haha!
Summary: Sequel to First Son. It takes off just when the boys arrive in Washington for their gap year before entering college. The Way twins finally film their reality show, Panic launches themselves as the country's ( Read more... )

^ fanfiction: capitol voice, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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cieluna January 27 2009, 02:44:48 UTC

*chases after you*
Thank you!
:D
*flails with you*
I am so psyched at seeing the whole thing posted, haha~
It's so absurd that I hope you don't hate it, haha!

intricate_life January 26 2009, 18:01:30 UTC

I'm so excited for this sequel! Very happy you decided to continue the story. And yes, I can tell a difference in your writing, but I just can't put my finger on what :)

It's great though, and I already want the next chapter, lol.

cieluna January 29 2009, 15:02:09 UTC

Oh yay! Thank you for staying for the sequel :) And another yay for noticing the difference, haha~ :)) I posted the next chappie and hope you liiiike. :D

belle_lestrange January 26 2009, 19:26:46 UTC

*squeeeeeeee* oh i was so excited to see this and i ♥ it.

uhm different...maybe the present tense? though i am forgetful, so i dunno if first son was in present already

cieluna January 27 2009, 02:27:57 UTC

Thank youuuuu ninja twin. :)

YOU OWN THE WORLD WITH YOUR CORRECT-NESS. lol xDD :DD
*hugstight*

belle_lestrange January 27 2009, 05:09:06 UTC

:)

YAAAAAAAAY! my first act as the owner of the world will be the abolishment of timezones muahahahaha

*huuuuuuugs*

anonymous January 26 2009, 20:48:39 UTC

Kind of cute but...in North America (esp. the US), we don't take Gap Years. If someone takes time off from school (which certainly can happen), they just call it 'taking time off school'. Jsyk.

cieluna January 27 2009, 02:23:57 UTC

Thank you for that :)
I would like to blame my incessant need to put a title to everything, sorry, haha!
The differences between European terms and American are my weakest point however, so I appreciate you pointing out one of my slights. :)

washingbasket January 26 2009, 21:53:59 UTC

Ahh!
Sequel!
Queen of the universe!
AMAZING!

cieluna January 29 2009, 15:14:32 UTC

Hahaha, queen of the universe? *giggles* So the polar opposite, I swear. Hmm. That reminds me. Queen of Eternal Damnation's reserved for me, actually. :DDD
Thank youuu~