too fast to live

[ciel_dao]

too fast to live
Jessica & Krystal Jung
G; angst, fluff, family!fic rolled into one.

She can't hate Jessica, but sometimes she thinks of what she could do if she could.

Comments

[xiao_baka]

...ouch. The contrast between Jessica's concern and Krystal's pain came out really strong here. Jessica may appear weaker physically (the thinness and bruises) but she's still in a greater position of power compared to Krystal, and I love the comparison of Jessica to diamonds - like ice, just much harder and not cold as the title 'Ice Princess' suggests.

And the line "she wishes Jessica could be a good older sister; hold her hand and hug her, tell her it will be okay" is pretty sad - as trainess in this industry, they probably never really had time to themselves, let alone for Jessica to be a sister to Krystal, and the latter's yearning is so sad. ;___;

The last line is heartbreaking. ;_____; I don't think this even needs elaboration, it just is

[ciel_dao]

i just don't believe that anyone is immune to feelings- regarding the ice princess part, there will be an accompanying fic from jessica's view soon. i do think the last line is quite real though, krystal will be trying to live up to her sister's name for quite a bit of time. thank you for reading!

[ciel_dao]

thanks for the heart :) ^^