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cidercupcakes

Fic: Dirt Under My Nails

Jul 17, 2009 23:35

Title: Dirt Under My Nails
Fandom: Supernatural
Words: ~2000
Characters/Pairing: John/Jo
Rating: R
Notes: Written for

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Comments 23

joans23 July 19 2009, 10:10:20 UTC

Delicious! I really enjoyed that!

cidercupcakes July 20 2009, 01:54:01 UTC

\o/ I'm glad to hear it, thank you!

dreamlittleyo July 19 2009, 16:28:45 UTC

I MANAGED FOUR YEARS WITHOUT GIVING IN, WHY.
BECAUSE JO/JOHN IS THE HOTTEST THING EVER, and if it hadn't been jh_jw where I found this in the first place I would be telling you to post it there RIGHT NOW!!! *bounces happily* I enjoyed this!

These moments were especially perfect and beautifully done:
In the few seconds that he can't answer her, she goes red and looks back at the road.

It doesn't help much, not really, but in light of the fact that she's eighteen and has made her wanting clear, John supposes this is still pretty far from the worst thing he's done to this family.

and the fact that there's actually a girl underneath those clothes doesn't make John any less of a dirty old man.

She's rolling her hips against his, making it obvious what she wants, and he's aching by now, because underneath the clothes she's pretty and female, and underneath the attitude she's a sweet girl who's made it very clear that she wants him, and John Winchester is many things but he's not an idiot.

cidercupcakes July 20 2009, 02:00:16 UTC

:D Yeah, this pairing is growing on me like crazy. John/Mary is probably always going to be first in my heart, but this is rapidly closing the distance between them. Possibly because my gateway pairing into this fandom was people getting me to write John/Buffy Summers, and there are, you know, similarities.

(...pause for a second while I consider John/Buffy/Jo. Wow, that might have to exist at some point.)

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback; it's always awesome to get into a new fandom and find out people are actually liking my take on things.

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cidercupcakes July 20 2009, 02:03:19 UTC

Thank you! :D

auroramama July 20 2009, 00:50:45 UTC

Jo really comes into her own in this pairing, doesn't she? "So I'm young and female. You wanna make something of it? Yeah, me too." I love John's respect for her in this story. And the image of him "docile as a kitten" is just delicious. Welcome!

cidercupcakes July 20 2009, 02:23:53 UTC

Yeah, I love the fact that most of the people writing this pairing seem to have a lot of respect for Jo, and that by extension she generally earns John's respect, too. Thank you!

dev_earl July 20 2009, 05:31:51 UTC

I don't usually out myself for liking this pairing, but I just have to say that this is delicious. ;)

cidercupcakes July 21 2009, 01:54:27 UTC

:D Thank you! Yeah, this pairing has grown on me like crazy.