(fic) A Long Slow Collision part 6

Sep 24, 2010 00:57

When I started this thing, I thought, oh, hey, this'll just be a short fill! Like, say, 5,000 words!

What's the current wordcount for this thing? 21,820 words.

And how far are we into the story? I have no fucking idea.

Guys. Guys. I have completely lost control of this story. Please send help. D:

Part VI )

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yvw September 24 2010, 09:54:11 UTC
I love your fic and check ap regularly to see it has updated. I think you have their voices & reactions down really nicely. And I *love* to hate on Ariadne here - she's just THAT kind of nosy that makes me raeg if expirienced in real life (and sometimes in fiction). She's needed because A & E wouldn't ever sort that out on their own, but still.... aaaaarg Ariadne :<

I hope the next part contains insights into A & E's kind again. (:
Can't wait for Sunday!

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renne September 24 2010, 13:29:28 UTC
Briefly, Ariadne entertains herself with fantasies of Arthur, a baby strapped to her chest, mowing down rogue projections with a machine gun.

Best. Mental image. Ever.

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moriapolonius September 24 2010, 14:15:12 UTC
Now I want Ariadne to actually be the other mommy!

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verselle September 24 2010, 17:27:55 UTC
Ariadne is so nosy but her general cuteness when it comes to being there for Arthur makes it all right :3

UGH EAMES. I just need him and Arthur finally meeting face to face. I'm looking forward to where you're going next with this :)

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frostheavens September 24 2010, 17:44:35 UTC
Yay, baby shower! Love the part with Eames' voice all flat; can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for this update!

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