Oracle 4/?

[vericus]

And now for some angst, followed by some 'Hide and 'Mia fluff. Still not pleased with the middle-ish to end of this part, but eh. Also: Ironhide's accent, it kills me.

Title: Oracle
Chapter: 4/?
Rating: T
Setting: Bayverse, pre-earth
Pairings/Characters: Ironhide/Chromia, Optimus, Unnamed Diversionary Tactician That May Or May Not Be A Suicidal

Comments

[mmouse15]

I love this.

I love how you're writing this, I love how you're keeping them IC, I love how you're explaining their viewpoints, and I really love how they're bonding for very strong reasons, strong enough to break that twisted bond the priests forced on her.

You are awesome.

[vericus]

I'm glad you like it! Chromia and Ironhide are so much fun to write, even more so in this 'verse, since it's really about them meeting and getting to know each other. ^.^

[quidamling]

This story is amazing, you keep finding more interesting twists in the premise!

It seems perfect that Ironhide needed a little accidental (maybe not so accidental?) information from Prime to put the pieces together. Utterly, perfectly him to then go right about breaking down that problem head on. And I'm glad that even before she was "Chromia," the Oracle had her own desires and hopes, even if they very very bound. The conflict within her is fascinating.

*massive encouragements* \o/

[vericus]

I love your icon. So much. I need to go find that episode and re-watch it...@.@

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so much! It's nice to hear from people that I'm getting the characters right, especially, since I've never really written Ironhide before...it's kind nerve-wracking tbh, lol. (But fun, because I get to play with new characters!)

[animelover1993]

All four chapters in about an hour!
THIS IS AMAZING!!! HOLY TURBO-MONKEYS!
I really really really REALLY love how you are writing this and how they... just fit...
Oh this is a fun read.
I can't wait for the 5th chapter!

[vericus]

Heeey, you found the LJ! XD Welcome, and glad you like Oracle! *wanders off to poke around the bunnies for some material for chapter 5*

[animelover1993]

Hey don't look at me! I couldn't write them to save my life...I got my own rampant TF plot bunnies to content with... *glares at the four latched onto my ankle*
And yes I FOUND THE LJ!
Let the stalking begin!
Hah... just kidding... seriously.. don't look at me like that.

[ext_210694]

Great chapter, and really interesting twist. The conversation with Prime was nicely done and I loved the way you described the formation of the new bond.

Looking forward to more!

[lillithschild]

This is awesome and the shorts after this are cool and all but I'd like to see more of this fic. It draws you in.

Love ya