Stairway to Heaven 4/5

[vericus]

So I have the part after this written, the final part...but I'm unsure as to if it really goes with the story. So I figure I'll give myself another week or so here to poke at it, but I won't leave it hanging in cyber-space for much longer.

Oh, and this chapter has a soundtrack. XD

Title: Stairway to Heaven
Chapter: Four
Rating: T
Setting: G1

Comments

[__wilderness__]

Oh that's just fantastic! I'm so glad that Jazz finally came round. And that they've both been lusting after one another for so long *grins*

[vericus]

Heehee, glad you likied. And really, Jazz didn't have any choice but to come 'round - Prowl had the whole Ark on his side, after all. XD

[gogglehead84]

Ha! loved it. XD I liked how everyone made it so Jazz couldn't run away, team effort! And this line "Defiling a storage closet with Jazz." had me rolling. I think I am going to use that when my mother calls looking for me "where are you?" XD.

[dvana]

Heh, indeed. Ask a silly question... love that it took so long for Jazz to clue in. Wouldn't have credited the rest of the ark with the restraint not to just spill, lol.

[vericus]

I think the other residents of the Ark were just enjoying the drama, lol. There was probably a healthy bit of fear sprinkled in there, too - getting between those two in a fight, probably not such a good idea, heh. Glad you liked!

[vericus]

O.O Management absolves itself of any responsibility for strokes, heart attacks, groundings, mental scarring, or other physical, social, or mental damages caused by using that line to one's mother.

That said...if you do use that line, you must either take a picture of her expression when you do or drop me a comment or a PM with the story. XD

[prancingtiger86]

awesome chapter, trust prowl to pick some cheesy love songs just to beat it into Jazz that he feels the same way. Loved it!

[vericus]

Well, the 80s were generally very cheesy with their music, so he didn't have much to pick from. Believe me, I was so tempted to go for modern music, but my Continuity OCD stepped in and demanded music from the correct era, lol.

[kaitekat]

I like the fact that it took Jazz off all mechs the longest to figure out that Prowl was trying to tell him something through music XD And the closet line -- that was just classic! Wonderful, wonderful chapter.

[vericus]

Well, Jazz was trying his best to avoid Prowl, so he was at a bit of a disadvantage. XD

And ya, that closet line...it's border-line OOC for Prowl, but as soon as I typed it I knew I couldn't get rid of it, lol. It had me grinning everytime I read it.

[kittenrinna]

YAY!
That brightens my day.
I'm super excited about the next chapter.

[vericus]

Glad you liked. Hopefully I can resolve my issues with the next chapter before my self-imposed one-week is up, but we'll see. :)