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Ragnarök's Eve : Prowl

Aug 17, 2009 06:14

"Cry to the Moon" by EPICA gives me weird plot bunnies, mmkay?

Title: Ragnarök's Eve : Prowl
Length: One-shot
Rating: M
Warnings: Extreme angst, smut
Setting: Post-movieverse
Pairings/Characters: Jazz/Prowl, Optimus
Summary: There was something Prowl should have done vorns ago

( Guess what guys, it's time to embrace the horror! Look, we've got front row tickets to the end of the earth! )

'verse: ragnarok, length: series part, transformers: bayverse, genre: smut - slash, genre: angst, genre: drama, format: fanfiction, rating: mature

Comments 18

prancingtiger86 August 17 2009, 10:25:01 UTC

made me smile when Prowl allowed those on monitor duty to 'sneak' out, and him being quite upfront about his intentions toward Jazz. loved it and there should definitely be more!

vericus August 17 2009, 15:34:02 UTC

I think Prowl, like everyone else, had realized that duty just didn't matter that night, lol. As he said...no way it could get any worse. And that included where Jazz was involved. *sagenod* XD

__wilderness__ August 17 2009, 10:52:04 UTC

Oh yes! Kudos for Prowl actually being the one to initiate everything.. and his logic center presenting that solution was wonderful!

And we're slowly corrupting you to the wonder that is Red/Inferno :)

vericus August 17 2009, 15:35:42 UTC

I'm firmly of the opinion that Prowl's logic center has been screaming at him for centuries to just jump Jazz, lol.

Someday I may actually have a scenes with Red/Inferno, instead of just mentioning it. X.X

mremre August 17 2009, 14:04:49 UTC

I want to see more, except that in most (if not all) Transformers universes (universi?), the result of facing off against an apocalypse is that either Jazz OR Prowl will die. In fear of that, I would almost rather have my imaginary continuation where both live... then I realize: this is fanfic!

So please, if inspiration strikes, do continue =)

vericus August 17 2009, 15:37:40 UTC

Oh, I have...an idea for continuation. It may not get written. But it involves Jazz being badass. I mean, he's already died once, why the frag should Unicron scare him? XD But, as I said, it may not get written, my muses are known to be fickle, traitorous things...

vejiraziel August 17 2009, 14:43:19 UTC

Can't ever go wrong with 'last minute loves before the armageddon', though it's a little sad those two always manage to get in some friendly banter and bickering. =w= Gotta love 'em. *prays to the bunnies for a non angsty ending*

vericus August 17 2009, 15:40:27 UTC

Somehow my Prowl and Jazz always end up snarking at each other, no matter what they're doing, lol. Glad you likied, and we'll see what bunny manages to beat down the rest in terms of a non-angsty conclusion...right now they're pretty much having a bunny-brawl, hopping all over each other and trying to get to the top of the pile, lol.

soldierly August 17 2009, 15:29:31 UTC

Oh, please go on! I love the air of the fic, the sadness but the small glimmer of hope. It was lovely X3

vericus August 17 2009, 15:41:33 UTC

So glad you liked, and that I managed to get the atmosphere right, despite how late I was writing this!

soldierly August 17 2009, 15:59:59 UTC

X3 Yes, the atmosphere was perfect. Makes me want to write some JazzxProwl now XD

vericus August 17 2009, 16:01:45 UTC

Mwahaha, always a success when it stirs up more Prowl/Jazz. X3