Fall From Grace 8/8

[vericus]

Whoo! Managed to get this out before I became internetless. Go me! I present to you - the end of Fall From Grace! To be quickly followed by a short I wrote awhile back as part of 'Once More With Feeling'.

Title: Fall From Grace
Chapter: Chapter VIII : Forgot to Remember to Forget
Rating: T
Warnings: Twin angst. Seriously. Angst. By the

Comments

[bluebirdsoaring]

The layers of this make it a perfect ending!! It's hard to read the part about the Twins and their struggle to find their fallen friend, but it sets the perfect backdrop for them becoming accidental Autobots (which it what I'm gonna nickname this fic!) The scenes with them totally mouthing off to SP and not even knowing who he was are priceless, as is their interactions with Prowl and Jazz.

And if you want corny, you need to add "and they lived happily ever after." I don't think your ending is corny at all!!

[vericus]

Well, hm, they did live happily ever after...but there's a huge war in there too...so I don't think that quite fits, sadly, lol.

And yay for two-week delayed replies due to lack of internets. :P

[okami_myrrhibis]

very nicely done. I liked the nods to canon, as well as fanon.

And the Twins have been alive & serving since Sentinel Prime? wow...

[vericus]

Canon and fanon kept sneaking in...I tried not to! But yeah. Ratchet just sorta shoved his way in, lol, and others followed.

Yesh, the twins are old mechs, heehee.

[vericus]

Well, Sideswipe's single in Excellent Adventures, so Inertia was bound to die at some point. *shrug* Plus I hate writing original female transformer characters, so she was doomed from the moment she was given a name really, lol.

[vericus]

Glad you enjoyed it. It was an interesting ride, trying to get as much in as I wanted without covering half the war, lol.