Łe Nòte del Carnevàl, by golden_bastet; artwork by smirra

[golden_bastet]

Comments

[murphybabe]

Beautifully written. Very evocative of another time, yet still remaining true to B&D. And I had a giggle at Capri!

[golden_bastet]

Thanks - I'm very glad that you liked it!

And I was *determined* to get that Capri in there, LOL.

[smirra]

I really had to grin about that one too!

[krisserci5]

Venice, AU historical. . .what fun. Thanks.

[golden_bastet]

Thanks very much! The lads are always fun.

[saintvic]

*bounces* Congrats on posting to both of you, I am so looking forward to this.

[golden_bastet]

Thanks! And I hope you enjoy reading it!

[golden_bastet]

Thanks very much for commenting!

I have to admit, one of my biggest concerns was getting the characterizations down properly. In the first draft, Ray (and his background) was different / more passive, and I spent a lot of time consciously pulling him out of that.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :)

[merentha13]

This was fun! It was so well written that I felt like I was there! I liked what you did with the characters - kept them the lads, but made it work in the time/place they were living in.

The art work was beautiful! The color choices fit right in with the Carneval theme.

Congratulations and job well done to both of you! (Feels good, doesn't it?! *g*)

[golden_bastet]

Thanks very much1 I'm glad you enjoyed the read, and I'm glad that the lads did come across as themselves. :)

And yay for smirra - I look at her art and it makes me smile inside.

[smirra]

Thank you! I'm glad you like my art and found it appropraite for gbs the wonderful story.