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Pros Big Bang - Past Imperfect by SAC

Sep 12, 2010 22:11

Title: Past Imperfect
Author: greengerbil
Artist: ankaree
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Pre-slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 35,011 or thereabouts
Warnings: NC-17 I suppose. Also warnings for flashbacks to childhood sexual abuse and dub-con (not involving partner).

Disclaimer: They’re not mine unfortunately. I just like to borrow them to play ( Read more... )

stories and art 2010

Comments 24

raven_rs September 12 2010, 21:16:22 UTC

I've downloaded this because I can't seem to get the link to work. Just in case it's just me having a problem.

greengerbil September 12 2010, 21:59:20 UTC

No, don't panic - I had my journal locked while I was trying to get the formatting sorted. Of course it might have been better to do that before posting to the comm *smacks head* but that's rodents for you - we're not terribly well-organised. I hope the link works for you now, I've just made the entry public.

Could you tell me if it still doesn't work?

raven_rs September 12 2010, 22:17:53 UTC

That works!

My fault for being over-eager!

sc_fossil September 12 2010, 21:23:46 UTC

Hey, gerbil, you might want to unlock your post.

I can't wait to delve into your story! You have such pretty art from ankaree.

greengerbil September 12 2010, 21:55:41 UTC

I had it locked while I was sorting the formatting out - I had a bit of an html disaster.

Hopefully it's all working now!

inlovewithboth September 13 2010, 18:23:54 UTC

Yay! I've been looking forward to this one since our chat in the theatre at Windsor! It's a great read. I loved the clever way you tied in with real episodes and was totally with Bodie when he was standing in that art gallery listening to stories of his partner's past. And I loved the way you used other members of the CI5 team. Well done, mate, it was worth the wait!!
P.S. Fantastic artwork, Ankaree, perfect illustrations of the story.

greengerbil September 13 2010, 21:56:53 UTC

Thank you - I'm glad you liked it!

ankaree's illos are great, aren't they?

jaicen5 September 14 2010, 07:51:55 UTC

Love long stories, and I love a tough Doyle in them. Thank you for all your hard work. It was well done.

greengerbil September 15 2010, 17:58:26 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

I think writers too often forget that Doyle might be less well-built than Bodie, but he is still a trained CI5 agent and therefore just as tough and well-trained as his partner.

I like your Doyle, too!

raven_rs September 14 2010, 18:03:47 UTC

OOooo! Loved this one. Another favourite to add to the list. Great stuff, and I so want to know what happens afterwards! Well done.

greengerbil September 15 2010, 17:59:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it!