Okay, this is awesome. And I must say, I love your dialogue. Really, I'm completely jealous. I can read Callie and Cristina banter like this forever. The idea is pretty keen too. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :D
Aw man, you gonna make me blush. I love hearing Im getting the characterisations right, so thank you. I really appreciate you mentioning my 'economy of words'. That is something I have really tried to work on, as I used to get carried away by describing every detail with every adjective under the sun until I realized I liked reading books where the writer respects the reader enough to think that they will 'get it' without expanding on every little detail. Each time I write I gut every sentence down to the bare minimum, and it is a task i tell ya. So, thankyou for liking that!! Such a lovely comment!
I read this as a break from studying and nearly burst out in laughter in the middle of the library at Cristina's comments. Too funny, especially "If by ‘that’ you mean, did I shoot useless footage of your exclusive, thrilling ‘No comment’ interview where the most interesting thing is the off-camera reporter’s face, then yes I did.” LOL! I'm excited to see where you'll take this.
O man, I really love your writing. Where is your next chapter in that schoolgirls fic you are writing!! Thanks so much for commenting and liking my fic, Im real glad I managed to pull off the funny. I always feel like humour tends to realism, so try to chuck as much in as I can!!
I think I'd agree that it makes it feel more realistic; so many times people get caught up in just a single genre where, for example, if they're writing a drama they forget to inject any other emotion into the script.
As for my teenage AU fic, Conspicuous Conspiracy, I've tried several times to write the next part but it doesn't want to turn out the way I see it in my head so I', just putting it off until I can get something down that I'm proud of.
Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue this! Do you have the next couple chapters outlined already?
yeah, I totally get that about your fic. I really dont know how some people in the community can just churn stuff out at super speed. I am in awe, seriously.
Yeah I have about 15 chapters outlined so far, slow burn. A few chapters written, but just letting them settle. I always post too quick and then when I read it back, am like goddamn, saying it this way would have been better or miss mistakes.
Cristina and Callie banter FTW!!!!! They really are the greatest thing ever since strawberry-banana Yop. Just saying.
I LOVE your writing. Love, love, love, LOVE it. It's funny and true to character and you write Callie PERFECTLY. And since I'm, well, pretty much infatuated with Callie that makes me happy!
Ill take mine in green and gold stripes, thank you!
mmmm strawberry and banana. let me ponder this for a moment.
Thanks for commenting. I couldnt quite get if you loved it or not, dont beat about the bush so much if you decide to comment in the future and say how you really feel. I <3 Callie too. More to come... Thanks for reading!!
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I'm excited to see where you'll take this.
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As for my teenage AU fic, Conspicuous Conspiracy, I've tried several times to write the next part but it doesn't want to turn out the way I see it in my head so I', just putting it off until I can get something down that I'm proud of.
Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue this! Do you have the next couple chapters outlined already?
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Yeah I have about 15 chapters outlined so far, slow burn. A few chapters written, but just letting them settle. I always post too quick and then when I read it back, am like goddamn, saying it this way would have been better or miss mistakes.
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Cristina and Callie banter FTW!!!!! They really are the greatest thing ever since strawberry-banana Yop. Just saying.
I LOVE your writing. Love, love, love, LOVE it. It's funny and true to character and you write Callie PERFECTLY. And since I'm, well, pretty much infatuated with Callie that makes me happy!
Can't wait for more of this. Yay!!! :D
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mmmm strawberry and banana. let me ponder this for a moment.
Thanks for commenting. I couldnt quite get if you loved it or not, dont beat about the bush so much if you decide to comment in the future and say how you really feel. I <3 Callie too. More to come... Thanks for reading!!
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