Only One

Sep 23, 2008 21:53


Only One

"I love you, Mao" he wanted to assure her but she had already decided.

Mao took off his hands from her face "I'm sorry" she whispers then for the last time she leans her head forward and gave him a kiss. "I'm really sorry" she repeated and then went out of the room.

He stayed there after she left. Jun leans at the wall and covers his face ( Read more... )

multi-chap, maotsujun, fanfic

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Comments 19

michannosekai September 23 2008, 22:31:17 UTC
hulo ^^

minerva from LSS.

I always love your fic, it's so real, and I love that kind of fic.

Keep on the great work ^___^

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plum_blossoms September 24 2008, 04:51:00 UTC
This was so sad T_T I was going to cry until near the ending, it became sweet. I love your writing style :) I hope to read more stories from you~

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chunamie September 24 2008, 06:07:39 UTC
don't worry i'll work on a new fic ^_^
thanks for loving my story!

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chunamie September 24 2008, 06:06:00 UTC
so you're fro LSS also.

thanks for your comment.

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machomiya October 2 2008, 03:35:42 UTC
love ur fic..it's kind so real

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machomiya October 2 2008, 03:38:00 UTC
forgot* i've added u as friend,,
hope, u'll add me back

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jmc_iuqcaj October 2 2008, 05:47:48 UTC
Hello..

Really love your fanfic XDDDD...

Im also from LSS...

Can you add me also?...

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nsk2077 October 4 2008, 16:04:50 UTC
hi...just wanna say that i love your fic...its so sweet...by the way i'm from LSS forum also.

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iqachipmunk October 8 2008, 14:17:16 UTC
i.....love you?
this is really sweet...
its like ecstasy..
i cried when mao left jun..
n i cant stop smiling when mao propose jun...
again... i really really really love this story..

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chunamie October 8 2008, 14:21:17 UTC
i love this one also. it's my second baby haha

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yamaki_ken December 20 2008, 15:04:50 UTC
hi...
love your maotsujun story... they were great.
I thought they will be separated, then it's gonna be sad T_T
love them to be together. they were sweet ^_^
anyway, i'm from LSS too...

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chunamie December 20 2008, 20:40:40 UTC
glad that you liked my story. if you're interested my other fics are here ---> http://community.livejournal.com/ebisu_midnights/
hope to see you there.

so you're also from LSS?what's you're user name there?

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yamaki_ken December 24 2008, 14:06:46 UTC
thanks a lot. see you too.

i'm using the same name - yamaki_ken. just found LSS few week before.

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