Little excerpt from Dubai Mania City

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[bklyn_in_dubai]

thanks for the comments directed to rosh. he's got some issues of his own to work through obviously...

[dogsofeternity]

hey there...i like what you've shared thus far and am looking forward to the next installment...

one small edit: last paragraph "As she at Martyza headed off...."

I'm guessing that the second 'at' should be 'and' ??

Either way, good stuff kid-o :)

Cheers!!!