The Dedicant Path Through the Wheel of the Year has been updated!

[chronarchy]

Comments

[lisbet]

That's awesome, thanks very much for doing this! I've just downloaded a copy.

[chronarchy]

Honestly, I'm just pleased I can (and have) helped the Dedicants. I can't begin to tell you (or them) how much they've done for me!

[mischevousblend]

Just ordered mine :)

[verginiamus]

Um, I hate to burst your bubble but under the various ritual write up pages, you repeat the same thing. Basically, you ask how did the *first* ritual go. I checked my old copy against the pages on the ADF file - and found that those paragraphs were not reviewed or revised. But I would recommend for the next edition, a through re-reading of each page. (That's the editor in me. :) )

I would suggest, on the second one, ask did it go differently than the first one. Then build on each ritual in questions.

I do like the additions to the DP manual though!

[chronarchy]

Could you refer to the place it needs to be corrected by week?

I did read through each page, but I have noticed that no matter how many times I read through, I always miss a couple errors.

Thanks for the suggestion, though.

[verginiamus]

I was an editor for econ. papers. What I generally suggest to folks is to have someone else read it. You have read it for so long, that your brain places in the missing words. Or read it backwards. Backwards reading catches the grammar problems and short circuits the brain. You can do it paragraph by paragraph, page by page.

I will do the weeks for you and post later.

Chapters that I spotted

[verginiamus]

Chapters 16, 22, 28, and 41 the homework section: "There, you've just written your first essay on a High Holy Day, and you're only three weeks into your training! You'll find that all of these essays go similarly...."