Everything you said about Wan-chan matched up with my mental images of her so well, and you wrote all these little sentences so beautifully~. I loved them all, but my favorites were 'abandoned', 'nosebleed', 'kiss', 'love', 'eyes', and most especially 'white noise.'
I'm glad you liked my characterization for Taiwan; we have so little to work with, that a lot of it ends up being improvised, and so sometimes people don't agree on things; that was one of my worries in posting this. Now I feel better about it, though.
I love writing sentence fics, because then you get to write a lot of little stories, and a lot is left up to the readers. It's a really fun exercise, you should give it a try with one of the many lists floating around someday (I also wrote a bunch in my last post, if you're interested, those weren't character-specific). GOD, I'M SO THRILLED YOU LIKED THIS!!
I love it when you do prompts, every prompt is really interesting to read. my favorite here was white noise. oh gosh, you can just feel the horror and sorrow going through her mind at that moment
while I don't know much about Taiwan's character, i think you did a very good job of describing her relationships with the other members of her family :)
Taiwan doesn't have a character either! She only spoke once, to yell at China and say she prefered Japan... so, once again, I took creative liberties xD
I love doing prompts, because I get to use so many genres and pairings in one go. I think 'white noise' is definitely a favorite~
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Everything you said about Wan-chan matched up with my mental images of her so well, and you wrote all these little sentences so beautifully~. I loved them all, but my favorites were 'abandoned', 'nosebleed', 'kiss', 'love', 'eyes', and most especially 'white noise.'
This was beautiful~. &hearts
THANK YOU~~~!
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I'm glad you liked my characterization for Taiwan; we have so little to work with, that a lot of it ends up being improvised, and so sometimes people don't agree on things; that was one of my worries in posting this. Now I feel better about it, though.
I love writing sentence fics, because then you get to write a lot of little stories, and a lot is left up to the readers. It's a really fun exercise, you should give it a try with one of the many lists floating around someday (I also wrote a bunch in my last post, if you're interested, those weren't character-specific). GOD, I'M SO THRILLED YOU LIKED THIS!!
You're welcome~~~ <33
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I love it when you do prompts, every prompt is really interesting to read. my favorite here was white noise. oh gosh, you can just feel the horror and sorrow going through her mind at that moment
while I don't know much about Taiwan's character, i think you did a very good job of describing her relationships with the other members of her family :)
overall, awesome job! -thumbs up- xD
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I love doing prompts, because I get to use so many genres and pairings in one go. I think 'white noise' is definitely a favorite~
Thanks!!!
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