Comments | chromatic_coma: [fic] A Day in the Life

chromatic_coma

[fic] A Day in the Life

Oct 19, 2009 19:23

Title: A Day in the Life
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma
Characters/Pairings: Bad Touch Trio-centric- FrUK, Spain/Romano, Prussia/Italy
Rating: T for liberal cursing
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Summary: A day in the life of the Bad Touch Trio as their suffer through their greatest agressor; crushes. Gakuen AU

( No one laughed. Not even at Antonio’s tomato-printed boxers, which were incredibly silly looking... )

france, prussia, romano, hetalia, england, spain, fanfic, n. italy

Comments 12

juandalyn October 20 2009, 00:13:51 UTC

Haaaa, I love the Bad Friends at Hetalia Gakuen and so I love this fic as well!
Wonderfully written :)

...

BUT TOMATO-PRINTED BOXERS AREN'T SILLY.
THEY'RE HOT

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 00:24:42 UTC

Thank you~

OH, THEY SO ARE. ROMANO, YOU LUCKY, LUCKY MAN.

bloody_isis October 20 2009, 00:16:19 UTC

PERFECT REPRESENTATION OF THE BAD TOUCH TRIO

... IF THEY WERE IN HIGH SCHOOL.

Seriously, they would totally do all this. xDD

Love it~ <3

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 00:24:08 UTC

XDD Thanks so much!! I'm glad you liked it~

omgimsuchadork October 20 2009, 00:28:28 UTC

Adorable! Some spelling errors here and there -- looks like someone used spellcheck! Tee hee -- but nothing so major.

Will you be going to the event on Saturday? :D

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 00:29:41 UTC

Ah, those silly spelling errors, getting past me!! XD

Thanks~

As for Saturday, I'm not sure yet, but I really, really hope so.

omgimsuchadork October 20 2009, 00:41:51 UTC

I can go through it again and offer you a hand, if you'd like?

I really hope you can make it on Saturday, too! ^_^

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 00:47:46 UTC

No, no, it's fine. I think I'll go back through it again (some typos were intentional XD)

Thanks!!

masterfranny October 20 2009, 13:08:24 UTC

oh, GOD.

this was incredibly awesome.

first, it contains all my fav pairings (Fruk, pruita, sparo, mentions of switaus), second, it's awesomely written, and keeps them all really IC, and the plot was enticing. you moved it to the end, despite my severe disappointment at how the trio won't be able to go on a date *d'aw* but they actually asked for it XP

(and oh, spain. why so utterly cute. why)

it was just too PERFECT and i'm really HOPING you're planning for a sequel, because i'd really want more pruita than just this :P (and how things keep moving along with the others, of course).

it was really a great read and you cheered my day considerably, so thank you for sharing *_* can i stalk you a bit now? :D

*worships*

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 13:31:44 UTC

XD Did you really catch any SwitaUS here? I didn't actually include any (though, since I left Alfred's boyfriend unnamed, I suppose you could see it as that if you want). I'm really glad you found everyone to be in-character (that make me so nervous, especially Spain), and that you thought it was cute!!

>////< Actually, this was written for the hetaliasunshine fic exchange, so this is my first time writing anything Prussia/Italy (it's not really a pairing I'm in to, but I do agree it's cute). I doubt I'll continue this, simply because I don't have many more ideas/time, but I'm still so, sooo honored you like it so much.

If you'd like to stalk me for my fanfiction, feel free!

masterfranny October 20 2009, 16:55:31 UTC

aws, i hope that ewventually, pruita might get a bit into your heart XD

oh, not Switzerland/America!

Switzerland and Austria XD (SwitzAus)

i really liked your spain, i can see him going all emotional but also with this kind of strange sense of honour. he'd definitely do that for romano. XDD

chromatic_coma October 20 2009, 21:28:44 UTC

Ahhhh (was that implied in here as well? XD I'm sorry, I'm sorryyyy!!)

Thanks!