[fanfic] Tender

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Tender
Author/Artist: myself, chromatic_coma
Character(s)/Pairing(s): France/America, onesided America -> ?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Kissing
Summary: Written for

Comments

[tanya_tsuki]

France/America ♥
I love that last bit of dialogue there, and the fact that you left America's onesided love open :)

[chromatic_coma]

Honestly, I couldn't find it in myself to give a reason as to why America was so upset, because it just seems so out of character for him, but I knew that France would respond the most to an unrequited love. And I really didn't want to have to name a person, it felt wrong XD

And yes, this pairing needs a lot more love (I'm also intending to write a Spain/Canada for your community, once I can get the inspiration. ... I think that was just it. :D)

Thank you~

[tanya_tsuki]

(I'm also intending to write a Spain/Canada for your community, once I can get the inspiration. ... I think that was just it. :D)

I look forward to it :D ♥

[chromatic_coma]

You should be XDDD <3

[greenpanic6]

i liked the angst of America why must America be so stuborrn

[chromatic_coma]

America is the King of being stubborn and self-dependent, sadly. I bet we all wish he was a bit more open ;)

Thanks for the comment!! <3

[awww_applesauce]

; ^; America it'll be okay just tell France what's wrong.

[chromatic_coma]

I know right? Why does he have to be so stubborn? :(

[awww_applesauce]

Its because he wants to be the hero! ; ^;

[chromatic_coma]

True, true.

[shinigamixiii]

Aww, poor Alfred D:
STOP BEING STUBBORN AND TELL FRANCIS ABOUT IT! >3<
Even if it deviated from the prompt, it still turned out to be something good X3 Me liiiike~

[chromatic_coma]

I KNOW RIGHT? GRRRR

Thanks! <3

[smrtypantz]

my love for france/america has just increased! again! xDD

and I think you stayed with the prompt since france's thoughts kept going back to alfred's red face :3
overall, a very lovely fic with the characters very IC

now I totally want a continuation of america telling france what's wrong xDD (quit being stubborn! heroes need to talk about their feelings too DDD:)

[chromatic_coma]

XD Thanks!!!

I'm glad you liked it!!! I would continue, but I'm a bit scared that I can't get Alfred to talk without making him OOC, so this is where it has to end for now. Sorry.

AMERICA QUIT BEING SO STUBBORN!!!