[fanfic] Bonding

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Bonding
Author/Artist: Myself, chromatic_coma
Character(s):Pairing(s): Ukraine, Russia, Belarus.
Genre: Family
Rating: G
Warning: Human names used.
Words: 260
Summary: One of her fondest memories is bonding with her siblings in that warm, sunny field. For

Comments

[min19]

Baaawwwwww ;____;

I love the subtle imagery and emotions throughout this one ~ Despite it being so carefree and pleasant, it was still sad to read for some reason. I really like this drabble, it's simple and sweet and yet impacting nonetheless. :D

Great writing! &hearts

[chromatic_coma]

While I was writing, I was thinking "It's so sad how this won't last," and I think that idea manifested itself in the fic. I like it, though, it adds another layer to the fic I suppose...

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! <3

[madnesshp]

I love the pleasant simplicity of this, and the lovely imagery! You really captured their innocence, and I agree with min19 that it was somehow sad. Perhaps because that kind of tenderness between them doesn't last all that long.

Nice job~ ♥

[chromatic_coma]

I agree; while I was writing I was sort of thinking about how this would be one of their last happy times together, and that seemed to come out in the fic. Not that I'm complaining about that...

Thank you so much for the comment!!!

[harosketch]

I love how you wrote these three. It's just perfect... And I love how they end up staying there throughout sunset. I have to agree that it feels a bit sad somehow, nonetheless a beautiful piece! Very cute ♥

[chromatic_coma]

Thank you, thank you, thank you~ I love the sibling dynamic between these three, they're so cute!

[ykyapril]

Ohhhh >.< This is so sweet, yet a bit sad... Is this what they call bittersweet...? :) Excellent imagery :) It's sad to think that after a while they would never do such things again ;_;

Lovely entry ♥

[chromatic_coma]

Yup, if it's sweet and a little sad it's bittersweet. And I agree that this qualifies, I got sad just writing it...

Thank you ♥

[animaven]

Sunsets can be sad, they are the ending of the day, then again it signals the start of another. For these three, the sunset is of fleeting peace.

[chromatic_coma]

That is a very lovely way to put it~

...I thought I had commented already. Oops ^^;

[tanya_tsuki]

This was lovely. I love seeing these three siblings together when Ukraine isn't crying, Belarus being all "Let's get marriedmarriedmarried" and Russia being...Russia. Very sweet ♥

It's okay~

[chromatic_coma]

I also miss these three as just siblings, without their problems. I'm glad you like it!