[fanfic] love and war

[chromatic_coma]

Title: love and war
Author/Artist: myself, chromatic_coma
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Spain (Antonio), France (Francis), Spain/France if you choose to interpret it as such
Rating: PG
Genre: Family, possible Romance, Friendship, War/Angst
Warnings: None. Unless Human Names counts (given above ^)
Summary: the year, 1635. the event, the Franco-Spanish

Comments

[tanya_tsuki]

I enjoyed it :) I love how you seemed to differentiate between the two as countries, and the two as brothers. It's kind of sad to think how--in regards to Hetalia, anyway-- the Nations see each other as brothers, but most have fought against each other at some point in their pasts. So it was interesting to see your take on their relationship :)

[chromatic_coma]

Yeah, it really is sad. And I'm glad the distinction I made is noticaeble. It's why I focused on using only human names!

I'm glad you enjoyed!! :)

[ykyapril]

as much as Antonio loved his brother, Spain was meant to hate France. This line almost broke my heart ;A;

I always feel fascinated by the relationships of the countries portrayed in Hetalia. On one hand, they treat each other as friends or even brothers, but on the other hand, you can see how they often fight each other to a bloody mess...

I really enjoyed this! :D And I especially loved the part when Francis went to catch Antonio when he saw him sway :DD It was kinda sweet ^^

[chromatic_coma]

That line is my favorite in the whole fic; it broke my heart to write it. TT_TT

I love exploring that complex; how much of what they do is free will, and how much is forced? I mean, Spain and France are bffs (along with Prussia), but they've had alot of wars against one another; how does that work, exactly? That's the angle I attacked this from accidentally XD

I loved that part. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this so much!!

[moirae]

&hearts

Just read it, and loved it. I'm in a bit of a rush, so I'll be brief--excellent characterizations and interactions, awesome details, and your Spain = so much love.

[chromatic_coma]

>////////< Thank you.

I'm glad you thought it was all good. :)

[electriclaugh]

sorry it took me so long to reply ):
I WILL NOT BOTHER WITH EXCUSES BECAUSE THERE ARE NONE WORTHY OF NOT READING THIS FASTER.

just--nicely done, in so many ways. like you gave them that, i don't want to hurt you, human feeling, but also incorporating the whole i'm a country and i listen to my boss, nation feeling to it. so they still fought in the end. the fact that you kept saying they were brothers like tore at my heart, and the last part where spain says france is a horrible brother, just idek. that like wracked and my heart, france is a lover, not a fighter.

ahhh, how adorable and amazing, and familial in a way! ♥ thank you for taking my request!

[chromatic_coma]

>////< I'm so glad you liked it. To be honest, I had no clue how to attack this at first, but I'm quite happe with the result (and the fact that you're happy makes me happier :D)

some of these scene trampled my heart just to write them ;A; like spain's accusation, oh! poor france.

you're welcome :)

[electriclaugh]

sometimes things are just hard to tackle, i know! i have this pretty awesome idea now, i just sorta got to get through it and yeah.

OF COURSE I'M HAPPY 8DDD

pff, i was like ";_______;"
because it was sad and true on so many levels.

[chromatic_coma]

I'm glad!!! :D

it is sad and true. i've always wanted to write something that focused on nations vs. the people themselves, and you gave me that chance <3

[yuuko_81]

sniff! it's so nice to wake up and find a lovely fic of my OTP! I really enjoyed it, so bittersweet. Thanks! :D

[chromatic_coma]

It's your OTP and you think it's "lovely"? Then I suppose I must've been doing something right XD

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!! You're most definitely welcome~